Fucking why

Nice, it would be interesting to see them doing it in a more public place than the showers (and other people spying on them, like Nora ).

Who do you think you are you fucking little prick.

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very...ahem...interesting...story, please keep up the good work and update soon

Where's the update

More plz when you have time :)

As you already know, this story contains sexually explicit material, meaning it really should be rated MA. MA-rated content has not been permitted on this site since 2012, and therefore this story violates the Terms of Service we all agreed to when we first signed up. Not saying you can't write it, but saying that this is just not the place for it. There are plenty of other sites that would gladly take it, including but not limited to AdultFanFiction, DeviantArt, and AO3. You could also write a watered-down version that does not involve explicit scenes to keep this kosher with the site rules. Take all these suggestions into consideration as they will help you avoid ToS issues in the future. Please understand, I say what I say in the spirit of what this site is about; making good stories great, if not brilliant.

Best,
Zad
Critics United

As you have been told, MA content is not permitted on this site.

The M rating is " Not suitable for children or teens below the age of 16 with non-explicit suggestive adult themes, references to some violence, or coarse language.

Fiction M can contain adult language, themes and suggestions. Detailed descriptions of physical interaction of sexual or violent nature is considered Fiction MA."

As suggested to you already, you can tone down your work and keep the uncensored version on another site that allows MA content such as Ao3, DeviantArt, Wattpad, Quotev or AdultFanfiction. Despite belief, you can still have your "lemon" as long as it is either implied or a short non-descriptive moment between the two characters. However, any details of penetration or pleasuring of certain body parts is considered Fiction MA and thus not allowed.

Also, non-story entries are not allowed on this site as well. You can post your author note this at the top, or bottom, of a chapter with story content. Or you could post it to your profile page.

Or you could ignore and risk it with the admins. But I remind you now that not only could your story be removed, your account could also be suspended, or removed, for breaking their rules.

DarkSiren49
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Hello. I'm here to inform you that this story violates site rules.

Please note FanFiction does not accept explicit content, Fiction Rating: MA, and the rating is only presented for reference.

You can't have sexually explicit stories on the site. My suggestion is to move this to a site that allows MA stories such as AdultFanFiction or AO3. Or you can edit out all the MA content to keep it here.

Or you can risk it with the admin, but that'll result in the loss of your story or even your account.

Metal Navy
Critics United

I hope an update is still coming

its a nice start but is missing something that I can't name

Damn this story is awesome.

I feel like Weiss is unsure, when Ruby asks the whole "Pregnant" question. So, is she not sure? Cause I feel like she's not sure.