Man this is sooooooo boring

You know, after watching Heroes Reborn, and seeing Tommy/Nathan creating a time clone of himself, I also wonder if Rachel had powers too, and her time clone died in her place while Rachel herself is lost in time...

Good story! ;)

This story was beautifully written, and there are so few Marren stories out there. I do look forward to you publishing more stories for the fandom

Really really lovely, thank you for writing this.

nice ending bro ;)
sorry to hear you had a hard time, my parents get divorce too, but it's okay. Maybe is the best for them. We just can pray, and now my parents are happier even tough they dont together anymore

Thank you for this final chapter, it was a good closure for the entirety of your story. You do not need to worry, it was written well. It felt real. :)

Thank you for this story, it was an amazing experience for me. Especially this last chapter was great, it really got me. Of course I'd totally want to read more LiS fanfics from you, but, considering your own current state and circumstances, of course that'll have to wait. I am sorry for the hard time you're going through right now, but I hope things will get better for you. Again, thank you for this wonderful story; I agree with you that more additional stuff would be kinda unnecessary, right now it just feels perfectly complete.

Dude. This is pretty good. Please post another chapter soon!

Aw, darn, all caught up.
It was sweet that Max could have a bit more closure with Chloe. :)

Aw, I love this chapter. Poor Max, so much PTSD.
But so many hugs! :3

Hey, I'm reading, and I like where this story is going. Esp with Max and Warren *wiggles eyebrows* ;D

I love it!

Awesome story, man! Update!

awww, that was so sweet conversation between max and chloe xD I like that