Awesome one shot here!

Great short story

Not bad. A bit shorter than I prefer.

Cute and fun

i liked it, bit short for my tastes, and there were a couple of errors in the story. you say 'in the wake' twice after harry brings mione to orgasm with his tongue, and in the beginning when talking abou the class you say they were 'charming each other's' but not what they were charming. besides that the only issue i had was the fact that you cant apperate in hogwarts

That's one charms mishap I would definitely want to repeat if I were Hermione! Could've used a beta for a few minor things though beyond that it was all in all quite good!

I loved your slash/fic. I'm hoping you choose to make it into a more novel-like fic instead of a one-shot. There are so many angles you could turn this. It's like a blank canvas awaiting paint. Cover it in a surprise pregnancy, jealous friends, new enimies, unseen alliances; the possibilities are endless.

2/2/2016

You can't apperate within the Hogwarts boundaries.

I loved!

Just to let you know, slash is an male/male pairing. This isn't slash.
Great read though. Harry/Hermione all the way!

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

awesome start
continue the story please

Hot, and fun. Definitely an enjoyable read. End line reminds me of Ray Kennedy's song from the 90's, "Women are gonna be the death of me, but what a way to go!"

it good

Mmm so hot, very exciting entertainment