personally i'm hoping for NelIchiHime.

Interesting...

I like this story. I hope you continue it.

Great story. Although the idea that Mizuru only has a single girlfriend is silly. Pretty sure he has a harem even in canon

why doesn't orihime just fix it and be done with it why she doesn't do this In canon either I have no idead

I almost forgot about this story. Best Christmas gift ever! Merry Christmas & Happy New Years!

Well... Very nice chapter, but update plz!

Nice story. Hope you update.

Huh, well this one is interesting. Never thought that the mask fragment accident would be the base plot for a story but it's IchiNel so it is possible. I gotta say tho, the chapter was fun to read. Exceptional grammar, eloquent narration with a very light pace and overall a joy to go through. I'm looking forward for the upcoming chapters.
Alucard out.

Hoping you keel this going. Your writing style is easy to follow and I didnt notice any major grammar issues. Really want to see a good, IchiNel story that isn't a harem.

This is a good start. Definitely interested in what you do with this story. What you did with Nel and her mask fragment was really cool. Hope you end up playing that into the story some more. Lastly just hope you keep up with the story, I know it can be hard coming up with things to write about.

Interesting first chapter. I don't have anything much to comment. But I guess this is worth waiting for future updates. Thank you for sharing. Keep up the good work.

*Sniffels & the sound of clapping* That was truly beautiful! Huge fan of Ichinel fanfic. I just think its more new & original than Ichigo's OTP's. I love where this story is headed & FINISH IT TILL THE END! Other than that, good story & hope that you get the many reviews I believe this potentially amazing story deserves. PEACE :)