Having Team RWBY was nice but I would have preferred to have more of Qrow and Winter. An additional chapter would be cool with Weiss confronting Qrow.

Found an error. Nock should be replaced with knock.

Oh how I love this chapter. How Qrow thinks he is going to die and Winter takes advantage of it with her teasing.

Noticed one error in the beginning. Soar should be replaced with sore.

I'm finishing up season 5 and totally love this pairing. When Qrow entered into the show I was like "holy fuck he's hot."

HAHAHAHAHA RUBY SAYING THAT IS THE BEST

Felt a little too fast in terms of Qrow and Winter; would have enjoyed a slow growing close kind of process. Also, Winter seems a little OOC - although, that could be chalked up to her own personality beneath her polished exterior.

AND IT'S FUNNY BUT RUBY WOULD NEVER SAY THAT D: !

Just to point out; you're using soar as in flight instead of sore as in painful. Also can you please add some more? I am loving the hilarity in this series.

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I couldn't stop laughing xD

I've read a lot of RWBY romance fics. But only the fics if this couple seem to be the ones that give me such joy to read. And this fic especially. Great work on it.

Oh my, this was entertaining, especially Qrow's paranoid behavior from Winter not immediately killing him and team RWBY's reaction to the news. xD

Lol I would have lost it too. and please for love of all that's holy write a new chapter because this is golden! I can already picture it. Daddy Schnee being all old fashioned and accusing Qrow of defiling his daughter or other such conception of purity and all(idk this is how I imagine him to be from all the clues we've got), and Qrow trying to somehow turn it around, and Winter being all 'ohnoohnoohno' and torn between hating Qrow for what's happened and hating her father for overreacting because she's a grown woman dammit and it's idk what century they are in, but let's use the proverbial 21st here, and not some pre-Great War dark ages. Oh, you make my day with those fics.

Well that was a thing, a very very funny thing. I wonder who was the one to report the incident though? I mean it is a bar, people pass out at them.

hahaha that was funny, GREAT story. Please update soon!