But I seriously can't remember how I got here?" - No, he CAN seriously remember how he got there. O_O Not gonna bother with the rest of the story if it's got more of the sad attempt at grammar.

this looks good. can I bet that Jim's in a coma?

Looks like that library episode of doctor Who haha
Looking forward to reading more :)

This is very interesting, I'm hooked, what a great way to wake up to the morning.
I hope I could have such wonderful dreams too, to write a story..

i feel so freaking honored right now...
but in all honesty i only remember bits and pieces of the dreams that i tell u...i did tell u that i was telling u before i would forget.
but hey the chapter is awesome and it left me hungry for more! i hope other readers will get that same or similar reaction cause it is interesting
and like i say u can always PM me anytime