This is just perfect! I can't find the words to tell you how much I love this story (and all your others I've read) You have such talent and phenomenal writing skills, the characterization is perfect and I love how well you meshed the 2 universes (it's so brilliant, I'm sad there is only your story in this crossover universe) Thanks!

I like this

Oh my, this is such a beautiful crossover. I love both these films, and this fic is a really lovely way not only to continue their stories, but also to weave them together. You have such a perfect eye for details, like Mary's frizzy hair (she was a homely child), and canon references, like Peter and Wendy's "too clever to fall" line.

I also really love the way you have all of these characters interact, like how Mary dislikes Peter's ego (and geez, who wouldn't?) but admires the openness between him and Wendy. And it's so intriguing how Dickon's eyes goes straight to Peter during Wendy's story, as if he sees right through it (and I like to think he does :)). Dickon had a pretty similar other-worldliness to him as Peter, although without the ego, of course. I wish he had a bit of bigger role in this fic, although I guess it's hard to grab any spotlight in a story with Peter Pan, haha. Really wonderful work - I'll be recommending this at my forum.

Honestly this is one pf my favourite stories ever