*Happy sighs* A very good ending! I look forward to reading the next one :)

Blessings,
~Fierce

I'm so happy at the prospect of Neal splitting his time between NYC and Paris! By the time I got to this chapter, I wouldn't have been surprised if Neal decided to stay in Paris and just visit occasionally. This is better! AND potentially working with Peter again! EEP!

Great chapter!

Blessings,
~Fierce

SUCH WARM AND FUZZIES! *dies in a piles of fluff*

Loved it!

Blessings,
~Fierce

I knew you were going to hurt Neal! Knew it! Though I was expecting it under different circumstances. And given you have more in this series, I'm gonna guess he lives :D

I feel a bit bad for Agent Elliott. Peter *does* know Neal better than anyone & knew better when to move in. A shame he didn't listen.

Great chapter (and sets of chapters in between my reviews :))!

Blessings,
~Fierce

Oh, how I wish I could hug Neal! He needs about a hundred dozen.

So happy he's back in New York & has gotten to meet little Neal! I'm really hoping this goes well, but am wondering since it's quite the long fic. :)

Lol, when you said Don from Organized Crime, I thought of Don Epps from NUMB3RS (though he was Violent Crimes and in LA).

Blessings,
~Fierce

I have no words to describe the wonder, the amazingness, the brilliance of this fic and all it's elements. Perfection! Author, you are so talented and wonderful to have produced a lovely story like this. Highest praise.

How much do I love this chapter!

Excellent! This should /could be the pilot for a new white collar series.

Loved it so much. Couldn't stop reading. Many thanks for sharing it with us

Brilliant, smart, breathtaking and so deeply touching! Loved each and every word of it, thanks!

I'm very fond of this story of yours: loving your solution to Neal and Peter friendship and life much more better than the one the show went for.
Neal working on understanding who he wants to be is so bravely sweet ...peter has done that too: I really really love that in this chapter he is not afraid of speaking about his own fragilities, fears and 'struggling-to-cope-with' mechanisms and that he doesn't go for that to show Neal how to handle but mainly to show him he can understand and mostly he is sympathetic (and that is a huge change in Peter's attitude vs Neal)! Thanks!

This story really has it all - great action, deep emotion, interesting character development. Both this and the preceding story kept me hooked to the last chapter. Excellent work.

I loved it!
great story. I love this universe post series you created and hope you'll write more stories !
thank you for this

Very good. Glad Neal/Nathan and the Burkes are a family again. And Neal back a White Collar with Peter would be good. Give Neal something else to do when away from the gallery.

This was absolutely excellent! The whole set up was very smart, and you did a great job of handling the emotional challenges and complexity. The whole 'con' went off perhaps a bit too smoothly, but the focus was on the interpersonal aspect so that didn't really detract. I especially appreciate that you didn't tie everything up in a tidy little bow at the end; there's still adjustments to be made on both sides even though you left it on a hopeful note.

Overall a wonderful work I am happy to add to my favorites