Harry wouldn't know about Tacos.
But otherwise very believable about two youngish teens.

Lovely story, beautifully written and a perfect ending. Thanks so much for sharing this.

yes the good ending

I really loved this story you write so well I would have loved to see a sequel will definitely be checking out your other works 5 star ratings from me :) keep up the awesome writing

Needs more to it...

What about an alternative where Harry refuses to go

I absolutely love this story. It was a fantastic story, I really enjoyed it, and it was very well written. You’re an excellent writer. I really wish you had written a sequel though taking place after Harry and Maggie met each other again at that campus bookstore.

ok now here the mentioning of the booktitle was good because it was actually referenced and important to the chapter and not just a throwaway mention that didnt change anything if it had been replaced with generic terms
another thing is that public school in britain and the us are very different things 8in fact they are pretty much he opposite) and so maggies mention of it would have atleast startled if not confused harry

Ok this chapter is quite well written but two things, first its the nineties so there are no ipods and second nobody cares what songs she listens to nor who the interpret is. Making it a radio or a cdplayer and just saying music instead of which would be far better since its far more timeless and not susceptible to the moods of fashion and personal taste
(i#ve literally seen people ype whole songlyrics they were or so in love with as a block into the text only to look at the story months/years later and be horrified on whyever they ever liked it and put it into a story that had no conection to it)

I love this story! It never really sat right with me that Harry ended up with Ginny, and even ships with Luna and Cho don't feel natural. Well, maybe Luna, but I adore him with Maggie. Wonderful story, wish I could read more.

Although the ending was as I expected it would be, this story was excellent. Well done! Thank you for sharing.

Loved it! Sequel?!

I read this once before, and upon finding it again I decided to give in to an urge that popped up last time. Just in case you didnt know, the reason guys have nipples is because of how the body is hardwired to be female during development and only at a few key moments is the flip switched to male. It shows in how the X chromosome is giant and the Y chromosome is miniscule. And theres a small slice into genetics fir ya.

The only problem I've seen in the story is a few syntax errors that might just be the way people talk these days. Otherwise, it is well written and in my head Harry and Maggie get back together and have a long, happy life together. Thanks for sharing.

No not OC.. it's true that people have less trouble talking about traumatic happenings to strangers than to friends...probably has to do with the fact that most likely won't see the confident again.

Are you sure this is a first story? It appears to be very well written.