Oh man, the web is getting so tangled! I admire how different and unique you make all the characters feel. I'm excited to read more!

Gah! The intrigue! The suspense! I can't take it! Love the call back to Alex and Jess' first job together. And seeing up a mission centered astound a MOC is super cool!

Love it! Getting the hydra is a fun mission. I'm glad Noel still got to play a part. And I keep forgetting she is 8! Thanks for keeping this story alive!

look forward to the next chapter

I’m less then a quarter into the chapter and I can’t tell if this is foreshadowing or the author complaining through his character

This is really good

Glad to see you continuing! Your writing quality is even slightly better than what I remember. The balance of life, action and emotion is well done and aided by the chapter length. I like where this is going. See ya on the next chapter.

Entertaining. That is such a fun mission, I am glad you updated so quickly, hoping you do that more often haha! I do hope I get the totally real not a scam blimp. Later

Cool

Sweet chapter, cant wait for the next! If im honest, I was a bit surprised to see you updated. I was near sure this was abandoned. Good on you for pulling through. Yo wheres Damien at though?

Very nice. I like how you're handling the actual game dialog and adding your own and making it work so well. Now I'm kinda stressed what E will do.
Keep writing!

Love the idea of a prison book club and the in-depth backstory of Alexia.

wonderful chapter as always!

Woo, I love this story. Really hope you keep writing, I can't stand not knowing who the rat is anymore! Looking forward to the next heist!

its me i love this story you made it longer thanks