| Reviews for Unforeseen |
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   tmntsurviver chapter 1 . 12/16/2017 please continue |
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/8/2017 FUCK IT'S SO GOOD WHY'D IT HAVE TO END LIKE THAT AND WHY THE FUCK AM I READING THIS SO FUCKING EARLY IN THE MORNING 1:06 IS TOO GOG DAMN EARLY TO HOP ABOARD THE FEELS TRAIN SHIT DUDE WHY FUCK THIS WAS GOOD I COMEND YOU ON THIS SHIT |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/18/2017 I like this story I do wish you would continue, you could have Mikey be in denile for a little bit and have leo comfort him and Mikey explan his picture to his older brother and after a while of leo being blind have his sight slowly return until finally he can she Mikey drawing himself |
| FightAsOne chapter 1 . 5/11/2017 I really wish you would continue this, it's super cute... |
| BlueJackie chapter 1 . 5/7/2016 Oh mine! Why dont you do some more chapters, the plot is awsome, it would be a great story! |
| Leonardo Hamato1 chapter 1 . 4/20/2016 Please continue. I would love to read more of this. |
| gima2618 chapter 1 . 1/31/2016 Need to what happens next |
| anime-turtel chapter 1 . 12/2/2015 oh my goodness, loved it. i know this may be a one-shot, but plz keep going! this story made my heart melt with joy, and i would love to see what happens next. :) this is an amazing one-shot, so im not asking for anymore than the amazingness it posesses |
| the unicorn lover lol xox chapter 1 . 11/25/2015 aaaaarrrrrr por mikey |
| Shiane Ventures chapter 1 . 11/9/2015 Aw! That's so sad! But now he really reminds me of the Same As It Never Was universe. Was that intentional? Anyway, I heard this was going to be a two-shot ('cause how could it not, with a cliffhanger like that?), so can't wait for the second chapter! |
| leggo lover 99 chapter 1 . 11/7/2015 ooh! This is going to be interesting! :) |
| TurtlesRAwesome chapter 1 . 11/7/2015 I should have taken your advice to bring tissues seriously. That just broke my heart. Be on the lookout for the second piece! |
| Fluttershy127 chapter 1 . 11/7/2015 I DID NOT SEE THAT COMING! pore Mikey now leo can't see his drawing... PLS (if you can and will) MAKE SOME MORE CAPTERS -) |
| Kilala58 chapter 1 . 11/1/2015 Feels |
| Chuchi Otaku chapter 1 . 11/1/2015 Awww, that ending! The overwhelming feels! :( You've gotta make a sequel for this! I don't think Mikey will make too big a deal over Leo's blindness but maybe you can make it about Mikey and the rest of the fam help Leo cope with his condition. A peek on how Leo became blind anyway won't hurt either. Your writing style is just so fluid and the transition from present to flashbacks then back is nicely paced. It just saddened me that it seems everyone but Mikey knew that Leo won't be coming home a-OK. Did they really have to hide it from the poor guy? Ah well. See you in your next work! |
