"because in the end, how could a lone bird, soaring in the big blue sky could claim the very sky he's flying in as his very own" that's just really beautiful

aww this is good, wish you'd update :/

next chapter please...

Please update! I really know what happened to Tenten after a week of stuffing weapons on her body! She's probably passed put or worst. Dead! Right now. Ahhhh. This feeds my angst hunger so much.

Huff. *pout* IM JUST HERE TO REMIND YOU TO PLEASE UPDATE HUHUHU. Goodluck with moving tho.

I LOVE THIS SO MUCH PLEASE UPDATE WHEN YOU CAN!

Please update very soon! I am very much agitated to know Tenten's fate! I was all crawled up and wrapped on my blankie but then- CUT-

Hey! Your username's really familiar for some reason. Anyway, I'm just going to leave a review for all four chapters here.
I see improvement throughout-the fic's been up for almost a year, congrats-and don't worry about the English thing! It's mostly just learning to differentiate tenses, and that comes with practice (ex. reading and writing a lot). A lot of native speakers get those confused often, too.
These chapters are getting progressively darker in an intriguing way! I've always wondered where Tenten manages to keep her weapons (seals on her body/clothes are probable), but the way you describe her sealing them INTO her body is rather discomfiting. Fits with the idea of scars, physical and emotional. Keep writing!

PS) Going to university in Japan sounds so exciting! Is it far from where you grew up?

Thank you for updating! Loved this chapter even though it's depressing lol I hope they both get happy a ending, looking forward to the next update

LONGER CHAPTER PLEEASEEEE *SOBS*

Wow your creativity is endless. I love the idea on sealing her weapons on her body. She becomes a weapon herself. The imageries that you associate tenten with the sealing portion is dark yet effective. I think of the words; steel, raw and bloody with that particular scene.

This chapter is short but accurate. I actually thought the length and the emotional effect was on point.

Naash

PS - have a great time in Japan. Enjoy everything.

Please update :)

Next please ! I can't wait!

I hope you continue. This is beyond excellent.

I like the development to the fic.
I wonder what she's doing. Is she changing herself? Training harder to meet his own sky? Going on more missions?
This fic has a lot of possibilities and I wonder how you'll end it. I hope it's a happy end. I really do. God I need that after what kishimoto did.
I do wish the chapters were longer. I get engrossed then... Cliffhanger. Lol. You kill me so. But I'll wait