I think that this has so much potential and I would love to see it bloom

I like it need more

Must have more. Keep it up. Good start to this must have more.

I saw 1 minor issue where it looks like your fingers outpaced your brain while writing. It was where gin and tousen did the barrier you said gina dntousen instead of Gin and Tousen.

Great story so far

By the time Kaien died, Urahara had already been banished for about 50 years.

and end of story. too fast plot, aizen got away in 3 words and ichigo showed too much of his power...bye

little fast but good overall

Overall good, add a few more details and go slower for the harem I'd say Tia haribel That girl from xcutiin the black one no stories with her so far and anyone you want

um ok would've still kept Zangetsu.

good be feels rushed