Reviews for Everything he deserves
Esmereilda chapter 11 . 8/14
just who is this mystery person and what water arent they supposed to the touching
Esmereilda chapter 3 . 8/13
and he is how did harry end up there of all places
Esmereilda chapter 1 . 8/13
lol all dumbles grand schemes have gone down the drain XD
Hadami chapter 9 . 6/5
A little weird that Ginny hasn't reacted at all to the elves being thousands of years old
DawnScarlet19610 chapter 1 . 11/25/2019
Dumbledore would never have written a letter like that with so much detail, and even mentioning Petunia's jealousy. You got that entire part wrong, no matter if this is fanfiction or not. Everything leading up to Harry being transported to Middle Earth was canon, so that letter would have been canon, which you most certainly did not adhere to. Sorry, I'm very passionate about this stuff.
pineapple-pancake chapter 12 . 9/28/2018
Excellent story. I hope you continue publishing new chapters.
I presume that at the end of this chapter Ginny attempted a wandless apparition or they were called back to earth. Hopefully they did, because I think they weren't going to find anything about how to go back by going around middle earth.
I like your pairing of Harry and Ginny, the slow build romance and how nice they are between each other.
pineapple-pancake chapter 6 . 9/27/2018
Hello writer, I totally agree that it should be M. If we are strict with the guidelines, this does contain sexual themes and violence. Many teens might be accessing material that is more intense at their age, but strictly speaking, this story is M, argurably E (explicit) for the violence.
Guest chapter 4 . 7/3/2018
I know my inner animal is a blue wolf and a white stag though I'm a girl and my soul is blue, purple, and white my mindscape changes constantly
Wolfiness237 chapter 12 . 11/24/2017
plzzzz update

btw u r amazing I adore your writing I think this is one of the most well written most enjoyable fanfic I have ever read or written

o and have u ever thought of putting in another perspective? I really am wondering what Legolas and thandruil r doing
e11ie chapter 11 . 11/24/2017
I love this stor fantastic writer I absolutely loooooove the crossover hp and lotr my two fav things
:D
LyraCarina chapter 12 . 11/6/2017
I’m loving this story! Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
Joe Lawyer chapter 12 . 10/14/2017
Harry is knocked out and defeated yet again. How many times has that happened? He needs a lot more victories under his belt and less narrative trickery, especially when it's being used as a fade to black way to end chapters.

You've suggested that Ginny has been teaching Harry his old homeworld's magic. Has she not taught him any useful combat magic yet? They're in a very dangerous world, enemies all around, no one around to help them but each other. Given the war torn world Ginny came from, you'd think she'd have a lot of deadly combat magic to teach him, including the Patronus which would be useful against a ring wraith.

I think you'd get a lot more traction out of the idea of Harry absorbing the magical knowledge and abilities from the horcrux in his scar. It'd speed up his development and allow him to be much more effective in both worlds.

Curious to see where things go from here.
Guest chapter 11 . 10/13/2017
Yes, leave the guy capable of mind control in the custody of simple yokels who think he only captured people through the use of drugs. There's NO WAY that that could go wrong. Brilliant.
RMT1161 chapter 12 . 10/13/2017
I was pumped when I saw this got updated. Great job once again.
mwinter1 chapter 12 . 10/12/2017
huh. Thank you. Awaiting more
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