OMG! BEST FANFIC EVER! I loved this! It was amazing! As I was reading this I warmed my heart to be able to really see Bill fall in love! And the small cues that let you know are perfectly placed so that we know but Bill doesnt! I was actually brought to tears when it was talking about mabels death, and how Bill begged for her to have her life back! And when asked what he had that was worth her life the only thing he could think of was his! if he didn't then she would go on to terrorize worlds with him forever, but instead of eternity with Mabel he chooses her happiness! It's amazing to experience bill giving up his life for mabels because, how I interpret it is he doesn't give his life away because he has nothing left but because she means more to him then anything else and the only thing he has that comes close is his own life! All in all, you are an extremely talented and awesome writer, keep writing, I believe you will do great things!

Nice

this is really beautiful, the kind that take your breath away

shook rn

this is so good omg

One of the best MaBill oneshots I've read, a unique take on their relationship. I love your writing style.

So sad! I am almost in tears reading this!

wow... deep...

A dark and hauntingly beautiful Mabill fiction, maturely written with masterstroke poetry. Thoroughly enjoyed. Will be following your work. C xx

Oh my god. I have know idea what to think Anymore, but I loved it

This is... your story left me speechless. Truly amazing, and the best MaBill one-shot I've read so far! XDDD

You have a really poetic sense of writing! I was hoping for a gritty/angst story like this and I was not disappointed. I love how Bill was the one to break in the end. There's so much longing on Mabel's part throughout the story that having her see Dipper after all her suffering was really poignant! My heart broke for her. Although, I'm curious as to why Bill believes she killed her brother? Mm...
Anyways, great job! This was marvelous! It's sad to think how our cheery Mabel could fall so low, but at the same time Bill's potential humanity intrigues me and you portrayed that really well! Brilliant and beautiful writing :)
Best,
Shattereddistance