Reviews for Not Just a Dream (Shades and Shadows - Part 5)
TaMya chapter 18 . 2/21/2016
When are you going update a really love this book
Ashley chapter 18 . 1/28/2016
The first/opening scene was wonderfulness! It was powerful but sad reading about Stephen at her grave. I love your writing. Are you working on any stories of your own, I don't know if I've ever actually asked that. Dude, I'm so excited for Sid's route though. Words cannot explain! I already knew it was coming because they dropped an obvious hint on their Facebook page, and when I saw I was actually right, I flailed, screamed, and died, about three times in three minutes! The preview for it looks super good! I loved the part where Sid said "don't worry, I won't make moves on someone with no sex appeal." Like yes Midnight Cinderella! Get raunchy! I've played all the routes now once, Byron and Alyn twice, and Byron's has definitely been my favorite route so far, but that's because he's my husband haha. But no, I am genuinely intrigued by Byron, but wow, Sid's route seems dangerous, and I love it! I think my ranking for the best routes goes: Byron, Louis, Alyn, Leo, Giles, Nico. I just don't find Nico attractive at all, physically or personality wise, so it was hard to do his route, but I made it through! Also, i'm really excited about those sparkles. I hope I'm lucky and get them. I mean, dammit, I've been playing this game since the end of July, I deserve those sparkles! Anyways, if you're still updating some Jerome/Jazza would be amazing!
Ashley chapter 17 . 1/28/2016
Gaaah I really loved this chapter! I loved getting to see all of Stephen's memories, and I really wish we would've gotten to see Gina in the series, she seems awesome. Maybe she appears in the Boy in the Smoke, but I have yet to read that, and I honestly probably won't, who even knows when book four will come out? 2017? MAYBE? I've sorta outgrown the series, and your fanfic basically wraps everything up for me, probably better than book four will do anyways, so what's the point of reading it? I don't know, we'll see when it comes out in five years. I want some Jerome/Jazza action, I completely forgot that they're having a baby! *flails*
Ashley chapter 16 . 1/28/2016
YAYYYY I'M FINALLY MAKING AN EFFORT TO READ! AND MY REVIEW DOESN'T HAVE TO BE LIMITED TO 140 CHARACTERS SO I CAN FLAIL ALL I WANT. HAHAHA. I really lack motivation, and I've been so tired lately with my 8-8 schedule this past month that I've had no motivation to do anything besides read and play my two games. But tonight I got on twitter, and MJ had blown up my feed with her political tweets (no comment because I don't know who reads this shit, and I don't want to raise hell or anything) and I decided that I really need to read this. Stephen's dad is literally the king of douches, I don't even know if it's possible to like him honestly like 95% of the stuff that comes out of his mouth is insulting, soon I see the reason Stephen dislikes him so much. Anyways, I shall continue on with the next chapter! yay. #progress
EmilyTheShade chapter 18 . 12/31/2015
Oh how I love this chapter so sweet and happy news eve!
Ashley chapter 15 . 12/13/2015
I really do like how, despite it all, Stephen still in some way cares for his dad. I can't wait for more, I feel like there is so much more to read with the wedding, story, and the baby, and I just can't write an emotional response because there are so many feelings circulating my body right now. But wait, that Ben guy is 35. Holy crap, he looks like he's in his twenties. Life isn't fair. Oh, and I love the "I'm going down on Dene" haha what a naughty thing to say;) Haha, my friend and I always come up with perverted things to say or anytime we see something on tumblr we share it with each other like I saw this iPhone conversation on tumblr between Leo and Alyn and Leo's contact for Alyn is "Little Bro *heart*" and Alyn's basically like Leo have you seen my sword I'm gonna train the princess in combat, and Leo being the sly dirty bastard that he is goes "oh bro I don't know have you checked your pants for your sword, I'm sure the princess wouldn't mind training with that." I. FELL. OUT. OF. MY. CHAIR. Leo really is amazing and another thing my friend saw on tumblr/pinterest/some social media was something like *viewer discretion* hehe we're all adults here...kinda...well me at least kinda. but it was like Byron Wag ur *coughs* dick for you me. Oh, gosh...some people...haha...I love it. And now I shall resume working on my one of my ten page papers. Adios for now:)
Ashley chapter 14 . 12/13/2015
Wooho I'm finally getting around to reviewing this! I just feel like my reviews are always lengthy and badass so I didn't want to short you out because Byron Wagner and finals, but mostly BYRON WAGNER, are keeping me damn busy. I actually read this quite awhile ago, but since I ship Jazzarome hardcore, I thought I should read this again. and flail. Like Stephen Dene is an overall beautiful fictional character, and he can be bros with anyone. I love the dynamic between Albert whoops I mean Stephen and Jazza. It made me die of happiness when she jumped into his arms because she was so happy. AAAAHH THE FEELS ARE REALS MAN! I think their baby is probably a boy, but what the heck I don't know. Maybe it's a girl. I'm not as decisive and I don't have a feeling like I did for Regina. But whatever happens, I'm excited either way:)

Okay, now can we talk about Midnight Cinderella? I am practically working to play this game. Seriously, all my money I earn just goes down the MC toilet. I think I've spent 12 bucks on the game between now and last Thursday. That's like almost an hours with a work. BUT IT'S SO WORTH IT. I've had so many feels during the Xmas event like all the stories were amazing and all the guys are my favorites except Giles we have a love hate kinda deal, and I'm not sure if I like Leo or Giles better honestly. But yeah, you want to know this beautiful thing I discovered last week? Alan Crawford wears glasses. Like when I saw Alyn in glasses my body was not prepared mentally or physically and I just kinda fell in love with him all over again. Like I am having hardcore Alyn Crawford feels right now. Argh so sexy, why isn't he real? But yeah, Byron always wins for me. I don't know though By and Alyn are wrestling with my heart right now, and I can't with these emotions.

Oh, and also Byron, Nico, and Albert need to have a threesome because there is so much tension there (but I guess it'd be incest with Byron and Nico because spoilers!) but Albert is in love with Byron as much as I am, it makes me kinda jealous. Like bro, back off, Byron loves me, and the kinky little shit known as Nico loves you. I died off laughter in By's Xmas story when Nico goes "I'll take care of you too, Albert." and he's got this knowing little grin on his face, and Albert is just like "oh shut up you little twat."I live for their bromance!
EmilyTheShade chapter 15 . 11/30/2015
Hi! So I liked how jazza is all excited about the baby. Do you already have a whole plan for what the name and sec is going to be? And chapter 15 was very good as well.

With love Emily
Ashley chapter 13 . 11/23/2015
OMFG DON'T TELL ME BYRON'S KIDNAPPED YOU, AND YOU'RE STUCK IN STEIN, AND THEY DON'T LET YOU USE WIFI, OR MORE LIKE YOU DON'T HAVE TIME TO EVEN GET ON THE COMPUTER BECAUSE BY AND ALBS ARE KEEPING YOU OCCUPIED;). DAMMIT DUDES, LEARN TO SHARE. WE NEED VICKI FOR OUR SHADES FANFICS. UGH. MEN. BUT DUDE SERIOUSLY, WHY DIDN'T YOU INVITE ME TO THE STEIN PARTY? BYRON IS MY HUSBAND AFTER ALL.
Ashley chapter 13 . 11/14/2015
Oh my gosh, I'm dying. Rory in her school outfit, and Stephen in his police outfit. That only equals naughty things haha. I love the line about the little fantasy, I actually started cracking up. Stephen uses like this sexy nerdy seduction and it's amazing haha. That reminds me, did you buy Louis or Byron's after stories? Where Byron is your attendant and Louis decide to give you a check up. Oh gosh, that's exactly what I thought of when reading this. I should probably buy one, but I have no money. Oh, and I looked up 100 pounds and that equals 152.32 dollars. DAMN. THAT'S ALOT OF BOOK MONEY. HELL YEAH. I'm super excited for more from all the couples. OH, AND I ALMOST FORGOT. My friend and I were out driving last Friday night, and there is this road in my city called "Giles Road" and my friend didn't know that, so we're about to get on to Giles road, and she goes "WAIT. GILES ROAD? GILES?" and I'm like yeah "Giles Road" and she goes "OHMYGOSH I'M RIDING GILES TONIGHT!" and I break out into laughter because double entendre. And I'm like woah, that's weird because last night in like chapter 10 I was riding Giles too. haha okay, anyways, maybe you find that completely pointless, but I thought I'd just share:)
Ashley chapter 12 . 11/14/2015
Hahaha I really enjoyed this, especially the line where Callum was like "why didn't you just say 'sex'?" and Boo's like "cause us women are a bit more classier than you blokes." Hehehe, burn. And then when Callum goes "us blokes aren't as classy as you women." haha, I love their relationship, and I can't wait for their wedding. Sorry, I actually was going to read this when you posted it, but I went and looked dup your TNOTS movie trailer. AND OH MY FLUCKING STARS. THAT. WAS. SO. GOOD. LIKE. I. CAN'T. EVEN. TELL. YOU. Maureen should've mentioned it because it was so amazing. Isn't the dude you have as Stephen like 30 something in real life. Oh, well, who gives a crap. Because he's very...rawr. Plus, I think Theo James is hot as hell, and he's 30. Have you read Divergent? Like I liked the first book and first movie, but everything has gone down hill since. BUT THEO JAMES IN THE THIRD MOVIE TRAILER. UGH. HE. IS. SO. SEXY. LIKE. HIS. FACIAL. HAIR. I. CAN'T. GET. ENOUGH. OF. Okay, anyways I'm bringing it back now. Yeah, I turned 19 today, and I just feel weird being the same age as Stephen now. Like I read book one when I was 16? and I thought to myself, "hm 19 is really old, but I'm okay with it." and now boom. I'm 19. It's weird. Oh, and yeah I have honestly no idea how I finished Loveaholic so early. Seriously, I finished super early I don't even know how. I really liked Leo's story. Hopefully you got the dress, it looks so flashy and classy especially since I paired it with my flower crown and Byron's glass slippers. Yeah, I'm starting to become a little crazy since I'm playing three games at once. Sometimes it's ALOT to manage. And I've kinda thrown MC to the side while I'll play this Niflheim game. because it's life. I seriously died laughing when they started mentioning S&M and whips and chains. LIKE WHY DOESN'T MC DO THIS?! I think you should look into it, the avatar stuff is gorgeous and they give you a whole bunch of stuff. I'm doing JJs route if you decide to check it out, apparently he's an unfeeling scientist but has weird sexual urges haha, so we'll see. Should be interesting. Oh, and I got this weird person on my GR, like this random 45 year old dude messaged me telling me "I was gorgeous and wanted to talk to me." and I'm thinking, how stupid do you think I am, grandpa? If you're gonna be a stalker, at least change your picture to someone sexy haha. Oh, and you should check out this book I just finished called November 9th, it's a realistic book, but it was so good. I loved this line where the main chick was like "if you're gonna kiss me, then it has to be book worthy." aah so much love. Anyways, on to next chapter!
EmilyTheShade chapter 13 . 11/11/2015
I DONT KNOW IF THAT WAS INTENTIONAL OR NOT BUT THAT MY FREAKING NAME! I liked the chapters and I honestly thought after reading Ashley's review that this was the end, and by the way you guys should go check draw something I'm literally obsessed with the stupid app.
Love Emily! :)
EmilyTheShade chapter 12 . 11/11/2015
Where can I find this trailer of yours?
Ashley chapter 11 . 11/5/2015
Well, this whole subplot was really intense haha. Loved it though! And that's so cool about the MJ tweets! If she'd read this maybe she would consider making Jazarome a thing omg I'd flail like an idiot:)
Ashley chapter 10 . 11/5/2015
Hello! I'm sorry I've been crazy busy and I've finally gotten around to this! The end though! Slay Stephen slaaaaaayyyyyyyy! Haha, I like how devoted Stephen is to Rory, but I think we all knew how much he worshipped her already:) okay, where do I begin? Dudeeeeee I versus you in a ballroom challenge thing lol I had to take a screenshot. I just finished the 8 endings a few hours ago! The clothes are so cute, and I love the black outfit for the guy! Looks sexy as hell on Giles, especially with his flushed cheeks and nerdy glasses. Rawr Giles:) I'm really surprised. I really loved everyone's storylines much more than last time ( except Giles I really liked his, and Sids) but I'm really surprised at how much I loved Leo's LOVEAHOLIC like Leo is husband/dad goals. My friend and I were talking about which MC guts would be good/bad fathers. I mentioned that Nico probably doesn't even have a ball to knock a anyone up so yeah there is that. Giles would be a lovely father to many kittens. Alyn would be on the fence because he is a dick sometimes. I think Byron would be very loving, and Louis yes just yes purfect 3 when you read his storyline you'll find out why. Albs wold be on the fence too. I don't really see him as the fatherly type: and Emily your question! Ummm I can't write fanfiction to save my life because all the characters would be super OOC. I write my own books/stories (fantasy) I'm working on one right now and my friend is making me a cover for it! I wrote a Jack the Ripper project last year and I thought it was pretty badass. If you ever need book recs, I read religiously so I can give you many:)
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