This was fantastic! I really heard all of this in Jack's voice (and the dialogue in the voices of the various characters). Thank you for sharing!

Just randomly decided I wanted to re-watch the show, and decided to poke around for fan fiction online... I think you really have a great handle on the character voices! I've really enjoyed all your one-shots. This is the one show from my childhood I really wish I could get a satisfying conclusion to. I hate that they weren't able to take their third season in the direction the producer really wanted to, so it's nice to get experience some "new" stuff set in this universe. :o)