damnit. the story is really good and i hoped to read more chapter.

So how much longer until you come back and when is Sakura join the story. Because she's way overdo.

Great story I really liked it good job writing the story please continue it soon.

If naruto is ALREADY ss-rank, why is he going to the academy? That seems kind of a WASTE! Him and hinata are ALREADY stronger then any "senseis" they might be given! So it's kinda pointless for them to be there, not only that but it's kinda dumb to have him at lowest rank when he could go toe-to-toe and possibly BEAT the hokage! Seems like a great WASTE of resources! Not to mention that they'd have to basically CARRY any team they were put on! Best place for them would be ANBU! Or just traveling like the sannin.

Never understood the reason behind giving naruto a "style", styles can be learned and countered, just give him super-strength and be done with it, all the rest is superfluous. After all, all it is, is how to kick and punch things! A baby can do that! With limitless energy, SO MANY, MORE EXCITING things open up! If he has to resort to kicking and punching, then he's already screwed up the fight pretty horribly.

Also why not DEAL with annoying civilians? And by DEAL I mean either kill or make the too TERRIFIED to do ANYTHING! You really think their going to change unless FORCED TO? THEY WILL NOT! So it really becomes, deal with them NOW or deal with them LATER, nothing is any different, so why not just DEAL with them NOW?!Put them in their place (which is beneath EVERYONE'S boot! It's a NINJA village, civilians should HAVE NO SAY in ANYTHING, if they don't like it? GET OUT!) If the third is too spineless and too much of a senile old MORON then ratchet up the BODY COUNT till he HAS to step in! FORCE HIM! However, if he goes against naruto, he loses his biggest gun, one hyuuga, the child of destiny, the jinchruiki and two sannin! The village would be ASH in days from the other villages swooping! He's in a "no win" situation, that the only thing he can do is BAIL OUT on the civilians!

If the village "needed" someone to vent their ANGER on, then it SHOULD have been the uchiha... Or did everybody MISS the eyes that are as big as circus tents that were morphed into sharringans? (seems kinda hard to miss) It's pretty distinctive and kinda NOT gonna be mistaken for "normal eyes" after all. and there they had 8 years of taking it out on MULTIPLE uchihas (before the massacre).. and sasuke loves throwing his (ex) clan around? Welp there is the NEW PUNCHING BAG!

Naruto's life, really didn't have much to do with the kyuubi AT all if you think about it... The kyuubi was pulled from kushina (who decided to get pregnant), had her location ratted out by a close friend(probably mitoko), then extracted and sent on the warpath by obedo, Minato sack-ed his life. and the third was BRAIN-DEAD enough to tell everyone that naruto was the vessel (AFTER IT WAS ALL OVER) and not tell them WHY he was chosen... AND the villagers were too STUPID to realize (1.. this kid could wipe them all out if mistreated/killed, or 2. they were separate entities, why they don't makes no sense, since the child EXISTED before the kyuubi was sealed and 3. they already had two OTHER jinchuriki in their midst ALL THEIR LIVES). So really, neither the kyuubi nor naruto DID ANYTHING to apologize for! Everyone ELSE keeps screwing with them both!

I'm still not sure exactly what kurama has to apologize for. A LOT of stories saying how sorry it is, but I dunno what FOR! It really didn't DO anything. Obedo, the uchiha, the villagers, the third, they're the ones THAT did anything!

Always cracks me up, that the leaf really doesn't DO anything until it's TOO LATE (even in ffs) oh yeah their remorseful and sorry and all that, BUT not until their CAUGHT! Kinda like a criminal isn't REALLY sorry about anything until busted... Their not REALLY sorry for doing ANYTHING, their sorry about getting CAUGHT! That's NOT GOOD ENOUGH to mitigate punishment and CERTAINLY not enough to consider them "innocents".

Doing great things and making the village PAY are NOT mutually exclusive... As was said about voldamort... "He did great things, terrible things, yes, BUT great!" AND that was against innocents, the village (in most ff stories... 99.99999%) are NOT innocent BY ANY STRETCH OF THE IMAGINATION! They kinda DESERVE to "reap what they sow". Oh AND jinchuriki lives' being bad as a matter of course? That's crap... Garaa was the first one treated bad in suna... Before him, shikaku was sealed in a teapot, before that an ALREADY INSANE monk... Naruto was the only one that had a bad life in konoha... Mito was first (and wife to the first hokage) and kushina second ALSO wife of a kage, neither one had any of the PROBLEMS ffs associate as "normal" bad lives for jinchuriki!(unless you count the rin fiasco and all that, and even there it, was run by AN UCHIHA from KONOHA). The three tails was the MIZUKAGE and kumo treated theirs like HEROES! So yeah, none of naruto's treatment is "normal" growing up, it's the product of a CRAP TON of plot armor and a hokage that jumps at shadows! (While ignoring the people behind him coming up to slit his throat). and a people that can't get past the maturity/intellectual level of a toddler!

Why add memma? He was a psychotic, fever dream of Obeto's after all! AND as one-dimensional as an uchiha! in other words BORING AS DIRT! Only an uchiha would POSSIBLY think that someone else was STUPID and DELUSIONAL enough to think ANYTHING like them!

"downcasting the girl as she that it was good"... TRANSLATE PLEASE.. because I can't make heads-or-tails of that sentence.

Got a little carried away with the "japanese" huh?

Okay, aside for all the spelling errors (which TAKE A LOT for me to notice).. How does sarutobi getting mad at jiraiya SOLVE ANYTHING? It's stupid.. "PUT UP OR SHUT UP" and as far as being old? DANZO IS OLD too! But doesn't seem to have a problem! I agree, START ACTING LIKE A DICTATOR!

What does Naruto look like? The same? Please no orange.