How the hell is 'To the Socially awkward' supposed to hopeful ?

That was amazing. The way you described Jaune's feelings and the situation was astounding. Great job, keep it up.
Lazyass out!

this fanfic is downrated, I mean misjudged. You would think it s not worth your time, but you will just regret not reading it. Hopeful, yes you are damn right.

Yeah the Pyrhaa part was always obvious. BUT that doesn't make it awesome. I was kind of hoping for it to go the whole week. Give him 7 days and he works through it with the different steps of loss. First like 3 are grief. buuut I digress. I really like your work.

;-; i ship Lancaster and it still made me cry!

God...

This was just...

This made me feel things...

I'm sad, but also happy?

How the hell did you do that?

I just can't even begin to form words.

I'm speechless at how perfect, sad, well written, angsty, and all at the same time happy this story was.

You're a freaking genius.

Impressive. Nice premise well written and I would be happy to read more if you ever add to it.

Loving this.

Rwby is all about hunters and huntresses, but people forget all the support that goes around behind them.

Good interaction and good dialogue and plenty of food for thought!

just because jaune isnt a hunter doesnt mean he's not a hero, and this fic does a good job of showing that

i like it!.. even with the slightly dark theme or as you call it "hopeful"- definitely with two finger quotes there- it gave off a unique feel, great vivid descriptions giving me a feel of the story with the right imagination.. great scenes, plot and over all flow..
just wanted to say i love most of your stories especially your one shots of RubyxJaune (what's the shipping name?).. been giving me a lot of ideas and terms in the field of writing lately.. these stories are giving me inspiration and maybe i'll write something this sembreak.. more stories and a thumbs up and salute from me!

-sincerely, your avid reader
:)

I like the noir feel of this story, Jaunes monologue fits really well with the detective scene.

I really don't like lovey-dovey at the start. I personally like a slow buildup like you did.

was kinda hoping jaune would kill mercury instead of letting him go

Hng my heart is being wrenched out OMG
Okay seriously, this is some quality writing. Nice alt story, horribly tragic backstory, bittersweet wrap-up. All great.

Another great RWBY story by you. On such an interesting concept as well. I would love to see some more detective Jaune stories out there.