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You have a decent plot for the story, but I have noticed several plot holes in it as well. That's fine really because even professional writers typically leave plot holes. So frankly all you really need to work on is your grammar and spelling mistakes, which will slowly start happening with more writing experience. Looking forward to the next chapter ️

Interesting. Can't wait for more.

Amazing story so far a keep up the good work

Well...

Great chapter! Can't wait till the next chapter! :D

nice chapter

Please don't forget that Naruto is a former agent of ANBU. Sleeping outside unprotected is a mistake no trained agent can do.

Will Kurotsuchi meet Tsunade Senju.

wow naruto must be really famous/infamous thanx for the update

Nice, if a bit cliche, story. Writing is really good and and I'm definetly following this. Though I have a few questions:

- Why so fast paced? You hardly gave descriptions, and you're skipping for the sake of excitement.
- Why the hell does Hinata have a crush on Naruto? In cannon, it happened because Naruto saved her before the Academy started. This, obviously, didn't happened in your story. So, why?
- ANBU souldn't have monikers, right? How does Zabuza recognize Naruto? He couldn't have been in Bingo books. Even if he was, Zabuza wouldn't know, because he is a missing-nin and it would be very difficult for him to get his hands on a Bingo book. Kakashi was already famous even before Zabuza went missing, so it is no suprise that he did recognize him.

Hmm

Your paragraphs are much too long my fellow author.

Cardinal rule of Fanfiction is only one speaker per paragraph. Anything more it just unnecessary clutter.

Always remember as a writer to avoid bashing and change characters for the betterment of your audience.

Ja Ne

I like where the story is going so far

great!