| Reviews for The Path That Could've Been |
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   WildlyLaughing chapter 7 . 9/6/2019 Good story idea and good grammar. The only problem would be the formatting of the story. It would be better if the dialogue from 2 or more people weren't squished into one paragraph. Instead, I would recommend that you separate them out into different paragraphs. Ex: Sarah sneezed. She stood there for a second staring at the green slime stretching from her nose to her hand. "Ok, first off, EW! Second, SOMEBODY GET ME A FREAKING TISSUE!" Heavy footfalls hurriedly stomped their way to her, loud huffs and puffs could be heard as they neared. "Here you go, boss." Bob said, holding the tissue out at arm's length, not really wanting any part of the disgusting nasal version of poop to get anywhere near him. So, I've separated it out by linking each person's dialogue with their actions. This makes it easier for the reader to see who's talking and also makes for a smoother read. |
| TurnupGrain43 chapter 7 . 8/9/2019 Awesome story hope it can be continued i wonder how different everything will be later on in the story. |
| Jo chapter 7 . 7/26/2019 I LOVE THIS! |
| Jo chapter 6 . 7/25/2019 333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333 |
| Jo chapter 5 . 7/25/2019 I loved this so much! 333 |
| nitewolf423 chapter 7 . 5/2/2019 Will this be continuing |
| JosephS15 chapter 7 . 8/12/2018 This is awesome, I want more pls update |
| buterflypuss chapter 7 . 4/9/2018 interesting |
| OfficialAce chapter 7 . 4/3/2018 This is a really nice story. There's not many Goku x Bulma Fanfiction stories. I really liked it. Too bad it hasn't been updated in a very long time, which indicates that it won't continue. It's a shame. Oh well. |
| JohanNishigami chapter 3 . 4/1/2018 the naivety in both of them is strong |
| JohanNishigami chapter 2 . 4/1/2018 please do note for any future updates and/or stories that goku' s training as a kid before he met master roshi consisted of lifting and then crushing boulders |
| Devilsummoner666 chapter 7 . 2/10/2018 Will this ever be updated? Exactly what i was looking for |
| BrownEyesAngel chapter 7 . 2/9/2018 I really enjoyed the story. Loved everything about it, like how Bulma was more mature and Goku thought things through. Even like how he wasn’t a tiny teen anymore. I hope that you will consider continuing it in the future. |
| dragonlord4546 chapter 7 . 2/4/2018 please update this story soon its a good read |
| blood enraged chapter 7 . 10/27/2017 First, praises, a good, sweet, and not a bad take on the relationship. criticisms: REally the only issue i have is the structure, i would like it if you would give all dialog its own line, such as the following example "hi, im talking" "oh hey, so am i" Doing this make it easier to read on the web browser, otherwise it really starts to hurt the eyes |
