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I just wanted to mention... PANDORA HEARTS?! LACIE'S MELODY? OMG UR GONNA MAKE ME CRY JUST THINKING ABOUT THE MANGA OML

wow~
sweet ending...n thank god either of them didnt died.

lol lavi lavi lavi ...u just really insulted ur future husband's father...

You don't get it. It's like you look at my comments, but you don't READ them. (Similar to when you hear but you're not really listening.) I'm not questioning your logic of why Lavi was captured. The ONLY problem I have is the fact that you're using the same fucking plot -the BLOODY PLOT you see- for most of your stories.

About Tyki in Of Beliefs and Moon Magic. I know that he doesn't have legs, that he's a merman, BUT what about magic? He doesn't NEED legs to distract those sailors, you know? MAGIC is in the TITLE but they don't use it when it's necessary? Why? With how protective they were of Allen, it is hard to believe that he'd be so careless, regardless of "priorities". (I wouldn't trust Lavi with rescue missions tbh.) AND the kicker here is that they didn't actually return to Atlantica, did they? They helped the pirates repair the ship and then followed them to rescue Allen. So, yeah, great argument about priorities.

And of course, in A Wolf's Heart, working together with your family and your crush's family to rescue the said crush would definitely get the wrong message across, wouldn't it?

Again, you're NOT reading the words. I never asked how old they ARE. I merely asked how old they LOOK. I understand that choosing the exact years for demons and angels is a bit difficult and really, I couldn't care less about whether they are a century or a millennium old. But you messing around with how old they look definitely has a direct effect on your stories. Regardless of their actual age, I think it'd be a little disconcerting for anyone to imagine Lavi as a pedophile. You basically said that Allen was a CHILD at the start. It's fine if he at least looks legal, but hell, he doesn't look legal here. Then as the story progressed, Allen turned from a "child" to a "man", in appearance that is, and I'm like, "is he experiencing a growth spurt now?" So, yeah, forgive me for being confused over this.

And. WOW. I don't really care that you blocked my official account but dude/girl, you didn't have to PM me before doing that. Now I'm curious as to what the rest of the message contained. You could've just ignored them if my criticism offends you that much. But seriously, real mature.

You... Are you honestly that dense? Or are you purposefully trying to miss out the crucial points of their relationship? Okay, so this may not SEEM like a big deal considering the timeline but hey, it IS bloody fucking important, if I say so myself, okay?

And how old does Allen look BTW? I mean at first you described him as a child and all then it was mentioned that he didn't look a year older than Lavi, but how old is THAT?! The child thing wouldn't really make sense anymore since I don't think the Demon Lord is a child. Or child-like in appearance really. Not to mention his Saint title and everything. HOW OLD DOES ALLEN LOOK?!

Oh my god
This story took me through to many feels to even begin to describe them
I'm currently sobbing my eyes out from feels
I'll admit i was skeptical at first but damn son I'm so glad I kept reading
For this I thank you for writing such a good fanfiction to occupy my time

I love this so much!

The manga komatta toki ni hoshi ni somethings or whatever I also start watching at last week what a coincidence.i found that from the anime hakkenden in manga version it was the same writer as komatta toki ni hoshi ni something and Super lover(this was a manga)

Ok I really am Yullen trash, so I hope I'm not considered a traitor when I say: "Godamn I really enjoyed EVERY single bit of this story!".
The Laven fluff just.. It just... Agghgggghh! Okay aside from that, I really enjoyed the plot and the way you presented the characters as well! The story did have some minor grammar errors, but -damn!- was this story well-written! I read it in one go! Damn! Congrats!

Aah I guess a little bit of Laven never killed nobody ;)

YEEEESSSS

NOOOOOO I'm crying D; D; I love this story too much! And while I was reading chapter 35 and came across the authors note, I noticed you said the next chapter will be the last and the epilogue, and since I was reading kind of late, chapter 36 was already uploaded! I was mortified and scrolled up on the screen, and sure enough it said the story was complete. I was sad because one; this is one of your greatest stories I mean wow. And two; I really wanted to be in a more comfortable environment while I read the last chapter. Just in case they died you know. I didn't want to be crying in a crowded area, but I read this chapter anyway XD But hey, at least no one died, right? I mean technically Allen did die and get reborn, but you get what I mean.

Oh my goshhhh I really want them to have kids. I don't know why, but that idea is just very appealing to me XD Just imagine it though! Them adopting one or more of the kids in the Church and then all the other angels cooing at them! *insert heart eyes* Oh Lavi would be a perfect father!~

*sigh* I'm gonna miss this story...thank you for even coming up with an idea as awesome as this one! I'm honestly surprised you even finished this fast! (that's what she said hehe I'm sorry)

I'm gonna miss youuuuu!~

Wow. That's really sweet.

You could make the next one about Lavi hurting or getting into funny situations to get Allen's attention - I've been thinking about that lately.

All your stories are amazing and that black sheep was hilarious when it blocked Lavi in the beginning of the story!

Keep Up The Good Work~!

I loved this story sooooooooooooooooooooooo much! It was so sweet and I just couldn't stop smileing every time I read it!
THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU *says a million times* for writing this story!
Write more stories soon Kay?
I can't wait to read more of what you've got!

/SHRIEKS, THESE LOVELIES ARE JUST TOO MUCH. INCLUDING YOU, AUTHOR. You have twisted our hearts in odd ways. :,DDDDDD
((I meant to finish my fanart for this by the ending. But I didn't know their clothing. :,DDDD))