Niiiiiiiiiiiiiice little one shot!

Super splendid writing. You described their love making in such vivid detail I felt ashamed reading this like i was a peeping tom watching the intimate acts between the two lovers.

This was awesome loved the details, I know it's a one shot but I think it could become something more. )

This is great. I really like your story. All the feelings...
Sometimes the best is right in front of you but it takes forever to see it.
Thanks for this One-shot