I really hope you decide to come back to this story one day. Would love to find our what uppity had planned and where this story would go. Thanks for all these great stories you've written!

Bill knows more than he's telling. And jeez poor Mabel i can't believe Will managed to get her back to the mindscape.

THIS WAS ALSO GREAT

Next chapter now... I'm raving for what comes next and I wanted now please by the love of God give it to me now.

Hmmm...
This was an interesting development...
I reallt love rhe relationship between Mabel and Bill and how it has developed. You did a thing where you never updated in a while then suddenly started back, can you do that agaon?

Nooo ! not a cliffhanger ! your writing is so good ! You're my favorite Gravity FallsMa Bill writers. I love your work , so creative!

Please don't abandon this story it's amazing the plot is perfect and if you have time someday please update we will wait for you :)

The same guest fifth time around! Okay so the biggest plot twist is gonna be that Bill and Will fall in love with Gideon and Mabel will kick them and their dremscape-mindscape-nightmare-creepyboyfriend bullshit off a cliff. THE END
But seriously, why is everyone coming back? Shoo, bad yandere boyfriend, bad! Also, it would be cool if Mabel somehow went into a Reverse Falls version of this story. I mean, she wouldn't really be leaving if she just visits alternative mindscape where Mabel Gleeful and William Cipher live together. OMG YES NOW I HAVE TO WRITE SOMETHING FOR THIS IDEA

*Ahem.* Excuse my excitement, for your skills in famfiction and MaBill relationship are mastered.

I love the foreshadowing! I hope you update this lovely story sooner! Keep it up!

AHHHHHHH! SO EXCITED FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER! Poor Mabel!

Please update

UPDATE! PLEASEEEEE! THIS IS MY FAV MABILL STORY! KYAAAAA also I've already read the first book

Yay, I found it!
Amazing, please continue!

Please continue. N.N

Pleasehaveahappyendingpleasehaveahappyendingpleasehaveahappyending.