Such a beautiful way to describe their love and their first night as husband and wife

This is so beautiful!

Really lovely.

Well done! I enjoyed this very much. Sweet and well written. Thank you!

re-read this to enjoy a second time!

I loved this - it so introspective and gentle. I love the way you've described the sounds and the sense of touch in this, very eloquent and evocative.

Well, I never had a chance to review earlier. But I'm glad I had to come back, because I got to re-read it. I loved it then, I love it even more because you chose the most perfect, elegant, descriptive, appropriate words in this piece: "invested in one another." You took something that was a fumbling proposal into something beautiful. It's lovely.

As usual, you've nailed it. Knowing the kind of people Charles and Elsie are, their first foray into lovemaking would be as they are: quiet kind, sweet, gentle. This is a lovely piece. Thanks.

I loved it!

luuuuuuuving it! the gentle adoration and passion! ahh

Beautiful and lovely to read Elsie's thoughts x

I loved it...that's what I think! It's so sweet and tender. Thank you so much for writing it! :)

Oh, this is lovely. I'm so enjoying the idea of their first night together and their first secksy times. I think it should be ficced a million times and I'd still want more. Hopefully everyone can pull it off as nicely as this. Thanks.

This is perfect. I've a feeling Elsie will be a very, shall we say...satisfied lady, and that Charles will find out his little bride is quite passionate. Those two goobers will be just fine! :)

This is such a wonderful story, powerful in its descriptions and emotions. I loved seeing it from Elsie's point of view, how she came to be in this moment with her husband!