:) love this so much bro

Cool story son (different is always goood)

cool story bro ;) hahaha really, it was amazing, i almost cry T-T i wanted to read how romano vanish (if he did) in the end, thought TnT but it was beautiful anyway :D

Cool story bro

You've fixed it! No worries.
I like it; short, sweet, and to the point. Maybe a tiny bit longer and you'd have a real nice entertainment story. Good job!
{And because I like to make people laugh~ Cool story, bro!}
-A Broken Imagi-NATION (Since I can't post more than one review and aren't willing to change it)

Your story has been converted to a computer code format. You may want to fix that before someone else notices it. :D

- A too lazy to log in author

Could you please fix the coding error? I'd love to read this and give a real review! It seems to hold great promise!

Please, fix the coding. it seems so interesting

Um this is in code for me, but the summary sounds really good and intriguing, and I would love to read it!

Poor Romano.