Beautiful - couldn't stop smiling

soooo cute! thank you for writing this!

Nice!

this was so cute!

Hahaha! This was great, I loved it!
Lin is awesome and his dry humor made me go crazy with laughter.

Man, this one shot was so funny! Plus, the characters were in, well, character!
It was lovely thank u for writing.

I just can't help but love Lin more when he gets vindictive haha! Him purposefully driving through every hole on the road is pure gold!

And this?
'Lin sat on a rock and thought about his choices in life'

Hahahahaha I wish you wrote the whole thing in his POV!

Hehe, cute!

Slightly OOC Noll, but only a little and it was sooooooo worth it! This is adorable!

oh my god this is amazing

So loving this story! Thanks!

Oh God... I can't ever start to describe how much I adore this fic. I probably looked like a lunatic while reading it ( what with a seemingly permanent goofy grin on my face the entire time). Kudos to you, writer-san!

Oh my, that was adorable! A very good balance between humour and romance, if you ask me. I liked the very ironic thoughts of Lin, the somewhat childish behavior of Noll (he IS a teenager after all, it is nice seeing acting like one once in a while) and his lack of knowledge about camping and Mai's clumsiness was spot on. Thanks for the share!

I think the part when they're walking back to their campsite must be my favorite part ... or is it when Lin locks them in the car? (ahahaha) Or maybe when Lin goes to find them after they disappear in the woods. It's hard to choose, I love it all! Lin's patience (and lack thereof as it starts running out) is just perfection. And I just adore the way you depict Mai: a bit innocent and completely earnest and well-meaning. Noll is (ahaha, ahhahhhaaha) hilarious without trying to be. It's just perfect. From refusing to admit to needing the toile and then just opening up his sleeping bag and being like 'ok Mai hop in it's the rational thing to do' is too funny. I love the way you've shown a slightly different side of all three, brought out by this unusual circumstance, which is still absolutely true to the characters.

I think this notion of Mai having done something really *really* terrible in a past life (knowing Mai, it was probably by complete accident) to warrant bad karma in this one is an idea that should be explored further.

Personally, I think this should be categorized as romance, too ;) Because it's so cute the way Noll gets Mai to confess again and admits his own feelings! (Also, on a side note, I think ffnet ate your section break.)

Thank you for sharing! So much fun to read!