Reviews for My puppy |
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![]() ![]() ![]() loved this story is it possible to write a second story of what happen next? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story too bad the grandfather and brother had to die |
![]() ![]() This was a horrible ending. You killed off her family members but didn't give it much attention just the mention of there motionless bodies and then just the word funeral. You really rushed this chapter, it seems like you just wanted to get it over with. This could have been great but this chapter just messed this story up, for me. Hopefully you will start over and bring something better. |
![]() ![]() The ending was disappointing, you just brushed aside the fact that her brother and grandpa died, also why didn't Sesshoumaru try to use his sword to revive them. It was to hastened. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great ending. |
![]() ![]() ![]() why you stop there for it was getting so good |
![]() ![]() ![]() arwwwwwwwwwww ta hermosho *-* sigue asi ! mmm... yuko y yuka? xD |
![]() ![]() Oh no 'had' as in one of them died. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Akemi and Amaya for twin girls Akemi means bright beauty, and Amaya means night rain so Amaya could look more like her mother and Akemi could look more like the fluffy killing perfection |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chap like it. The one thing is kagome seems like a child. Instead for a grown woman. Is she still 15 and pregnant? To much wining. Being pregnant doesn't leave you just so pityful. But I like your story don't get me wrong. I think anyone that can create something out of thin air like this story is amazing. Looking forward to seeing next chap. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kagome had twins. |
![]() ![]() Yaaayyyyy an update :D Took you FOREVER But... I forgive you, As long as you keep updating:P |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope Kikyo gets struck by lightning. |
![]() ![]() ![]() next chapter please |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chap please update soon. It would be great if inu killed kinky ho. |