AWWW THIS WAS SO PERFECTTT :((

the emotional goodbyes, ethan's scary mum, the jokes about the doppelgangers, THAT BETHAN CONTENT THO, ESPECIALLY THEIR NEW FAIRYTALE :'(( IM SO HAPPY I COULD CRYYY :'((((

another wonderful story wrapped up for my dearest fanfic buddy! im so proud of u! u did such a good job! i can't wait for what u have next *hugs* :D

I loved this so much such a perfect ending it was everything I could have ever wanted in this last chapter wonderful and fantastic job yet again mbavfan66 you never disappoint with your writing and storytelling of making fanfiction as you’ll always continue to blow me away every single time again and again I’m sad to see this story end since it’s one of my favorites but I’m happy that I could be along for the ride for all the ups and downs of this crazy and beautiful fairytale story staring my two favorite lovable dorky boys

AWWWWWW! that's so NICEEEE! im glad benny was able to get along with the fam, and now jae is going to be queen someday and? look at her go? so proud of her?

im glad everything went well with rosalie and what not! it's nice to know that she's super understanding and what not. i am so excited to see how the story endsss! i don't want it to end, but i am stil excited :'))

such a wonderful ending I love it so beautiful well done

AHHHH GOOD! ETHAN IS OKAY! AND SO IS BENNY! AND THE WITCH I D! GOOD! and i am glad that other girl was okay! good on you for remembering that! it's a nice touch :"))

omgg the king of amaria...here we go boys...i hope everyone survives meeting the 'rents, heh. GOD i loved everything about this, i missed this story so much! you did freakin fantastic, my friend, as always! i can't wait for the next chapter *hand heart* :DD

yes everything's ok i was worried there for a bit for everyone and was feeling heartbroken sad and happy again way to make me feel like being on a rollercoaster mbavfan66 but still i loved this chapter a lot cant wait for the next one where hopefully ross has changed his mind about his son's feelings but we're see...

I love your story

OMG i did not expect that, it was an excelent chapter.

ARE YOU FUCKING KIDDING ME
ARE YOU—

WHAT?!
WHAT?!
W H Y ?!
WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYY?!

I AM IN SHAMBLES
EMOTIONAL SHAMBLES

FANFIC BUDDY HOW DARE YOU
HOW DARE—

OH MY GOD. I HAVE— GOD I HAVE NO WORDS
JESUS
ACK
ACKKKKKKKKK

great chapter fanfic buddy ur doin great and i love you :DD

but whYYYYYY

wow i love this chapter so much im so gald ethan finally saved benny but now im really worried for him i hope benny didn't kill or hurt him why would he do that?! i have a pretty good feeling that it was the witch that did it you evil woman leave my otp alone! well i guess i have to wait until the next one to know for sure

I read the two books in a day (do not ask how) and this is great! I need the decade of this story :D

This is the best!

Ethan is saved! But it looks like there's gonna be some more major trouble once they reach the castle.

And yep, it's me, Bethan Forever, I finally got around to changing up my username!

This story is coming to an end soon and I'm sad to see it go, but I am excited for your future works and how this story ends!

Seee ya next time! :)

ayyy ethan is good! honestly you had me worried with the whole "not getting the unicorn on time" and stuff — i almost thought ethan was a goner :'/ but i really enjoyed it! go sarah for getting the good ol' unicorn in time :)

but shit man i think the winner of this chapter was the scene between alissa and benny! like damn it gave me chills — i know im apart of the "I HATE ALISSA" squad but even i have to admit that she is a terrific antagonist. like "you're friends and the prince have almost reached my castle ... i'll have to prepare a proper welcoming party for their arrival when they get here" and the whole "guest of honour thing" (which i won't be surprised if the next chapter is titled "guest of honour") just blew my freakin mind. i can honestly see that as like a sort of game of thrones drama revelation or something — like damn, fanfic buddy. you done good *round of applause* gahhh alissa what do you have planned?

anywhoo i am going on a rant aren't i? anyway i really really liked this chapter (lowkey think this is one of my favourite series of yours, not gonna lie — i mean, everything you write is ace, but "a fairytale kind of love" is honestly so so good. go have some ice cream — you deserve it :) and i cannot wait for the next one like seriously i am so hYPED :D

I loved this chapter it was so great I'm gald Ethan's ok and cured also I was really scared for Benny when Alissa started choking him but I'm thankful she let him go but I still don't like her I hate her greatly for trying to kill Ethan and for hurting Benny over and over hopefully she will be stopped for good because she's really starting to get on my nerves anyway enough with my Alissa rant I still liked this chapter very much and can't wait for the next one ps I'm going to miss that unicorn it was such a friend for helping out Ethan BUT I STILL WANT THAT UNICORN RIDE