Oh fuck holy shit, oh gOD. I'm screaming- loss at words of how good this fic is! It's amazing, feels realistic, at the same time hot! Just in two hours of their love making, you set so many moods there- like when natsu was horny as fuck but then suddenly he became gentle with lucy; caring and being all soft despite being rough earlier. I love it so much! And the fic ended quite nicely, you seem to take your time so much on this fic. The pace is not too fast and not too slow. I just- LOVE IT. Oh Mavis you're indeed one of my favorite authors! I do hope you will still write NaLu fics in the future!

This is the best nalu lemon I have ever read. I like how you captured both of their emotions in full detail

Love this story! It was dragged out wonderfully! And the detail was amazing too!

Lov the story and all the sweet moments between them!

Oh my goodness. I don't think I even have words for this masterpiece. Brilliantly written. I also liked the fact you changed up their positions and what they did. In most lemons the writer just goes for the basic missionary and maybe cowgirl. So thank you for being original!

genuinely the best things i've ever ever read, fantastic smut holy shit

It's amazing how yoy can make something so smuty and yummy and at the same time so sweet! I loved it! /

Wow. That's great.

Awesome story! One of the best smuts I have read in quite a while. So much detail and keeping Lucy and Natsu in character. Amazing job! I hope you write more stories like this one.

This was probably one of the hottest fics I've ever read and I honestly don't even ship Nalu like crazy but you may have changed my mind. This was completely fantastic.

wow that was wow, excellent detail

LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS!

One of the best horny nalu i've read so far

Wow that was really sexy ! And I loved the fluff too !

Very sexy so far ' I love a horny Natsu ( and Lucy ) teamedwardjace/Twishadowhunter