So first, you seem to tend to tell people instead of showing them through descriptions. You also don't really say what any of the characters are thinking during a dialogue. you only use the word said for the most part. This isn't necessarily a terrible thing but it makes conversations seem to stretch with no change nor end. You also tend to skip over descriptions quite a bit and if you don't, you give the bare minimum. The saying less is more doesn't apply to this situation. Don't go overboard but more descriptions always keeps the reader's attention more do then just saying what it is. Give some more information for the reader to build an image of what you are writing. Being able to completely picture what a person is describing is awesome and it keeps the reader feeling like they are actually there.
Over all it seems that you have planned out the world that the two universes meld together but you should give a reason for things. You don't exactly give a reason for the gods to follow the lead of the first to join the humans. Even if the original didn't give a reason, make one up. It's your story. Everything doesn't need a. in depth reason but something as important as the introduction to your story needs to have a thought out one.
The story seems good for now but these are some things that will make your story seem more real to the reader and get them emotionally invested in it. The biggest accomplishment a writer can have is for the reader to feel actual emotional attachment to the characters and the world.

Never call the Bijuus gods again. A stand user from JoJo is more of a god than them

Pienso que es maravilloso que hayas puesto múltiples mazmorras en vez de una sola, puedes hacer que dependiendo de en qué mazmorra vaya Naruto explorar tenga especialidades de monstruos diferentes en cada una de ellas o que una de ellas tenga más trampas que otra

Gonna be honest but it is like a good idea done wrong.

Could have been a great story but it basically follows Danmachi canon albeit fairly loosely and replacing key characters with naruto characters. The will to protect is basically the growth cheat of bell but it is kinda BS no back story at all no given reason for why that skill manifested and all.

A pet peeve.

Konohagakure i believe or the village hidden in the leaves. it basically acts as the orario. so it isn't hidden.

Goddamnit.

May have misunderstood some parts due to me skipping them but i hope that someday someone will have a similar idea done better. because no offense but this story could be better.

Love the story! I can’t wait until the next chapter is out.

its becoming a warped version of the canon story, and not particularly well done either. it's not too bad but needs work. you'd have been better off reforming bells background since it's rather in line with naruto's. the will to protect would have been better as the will of fire, and it's rather vague in description. uzu having a weak dungeon doesnt really make sense considering the reason they were wiped out and if she lived in uzu how did she meet minato? next up minato's death could be better too, the man was known for great things but he was completely glossed over, you could have said that he went to fight the legendary reaper and died fighting. the fights need work as well, containing little to no action value and lacking many details that illustrate the fight. kurama is incredibly ooc being very reminiscent of Hestia only she doesn't have such a huge infatuation, remember each character is unique and each have their own personalities so do try to have at least 1 character other than the still sorta off hinata, be in character. finally the level of cohesion needs work as well, because you are missing key points of both worlds with this. danmachi, adventurers get exceli from killing monsters which allows them to grow and dedicate all their time to learning magic if they use it or need grimoires. the adventurers here get blessed with chakra something they should already have, gods blessing gives them abilities past their basic ones and have no way of actually gaining power unless they are draining chakra, again abilities that are specific to certain idividuals that ruins that such as the preta path or akado yoroi. on top of that this is still the ninja world so the world system has no reason to change so much. the guild should be run by the hokage, the academy should effectively be the guild and the place where they teach people to be adventurers, still shinobi in this case, to go into the dungeon. this allows for missions, the chunin exams, forming relationships with foreign entities, and still keeps the general feel of the world. if youd be worried about the familia aspect don't they don't necessarily have to have the 4 man cells and even if they did you could do the familias like the clans. whether he has a differeent background or not that would allow naruto to form the relationships he has in canon.

cant wait for more

hmm... You didn't describe the sword so just because I can, I'm going to imagine it as zangetsu or something lol love the story! still dont know Hanabi's age in the story as well, if she's not a chibi she would be a decent choice for a pairing for Naruto should you go that route as she spends the most time with him with them going through dungeons together most days

originally I was sceptical about his skill but it looks like a low level hirashin or like a flash step lol really cool story also how old is Hanabi in this story?

this is awesome. unusual character placement but it fit somehow. the story seems very cohesive, the only issues I can find are little grammar and spelling bolbs (says the girl typing this in her phone without any type of capitalization or sentence structure lol)

Naruto needs clones

Damn it, the end so far, jeez start updating again please! Oh well, it seems that familial issues are abound here, hope they work out.

Hah! That alias is perfect! Don't deny it Naruto!

Welp, hopefully Kabuto won't make a move till Naruto is stronger, Hanabi may die if he does.

Hahaha, poor Naruto, Hanabi couldn't believe it! Lol. Good that Naruto now has a much better weapon to use and that Gyuki has possibly come up with a way for the Bijuu cloak to be utilized.