You go, L!

Sass

"More cheesecake please," is so like L Lawliet to respond after his successor's badass appearance with sim very expert hacking...Matt possibly. What a blow to the ego it would be if Light were to find out Near, excuse me,N's actual age.

Ah! I love this!

Hi :) I loved this new chapter. It was really nice and long. And L got to get out a bit so it was a nice new change in scenery. I like seeing Light "serving" L to get his help. The real god of the new world should be L XD. Hope to read more soon !

Ooh, this is really good!

Aw, poor L ! Light should go and confort him XD. I hope to read some more soon :)

Nice chapter. I wonder how L is going to throw Light off track. It's getting interesting. Hope to read more soon :)

If I can give you just a small advice : maybe you should try improving your summary. It's not that it is bad but I think it could be a bit more attracting. The summary is important to attract readers (as you seem to want your fic to have more readers).

I love with you,r doing. It a very good story so far.

This is amazing. Please continue soon!

I like the plot concept a lot, looking forward to see where it goes (somehow imagining light trying to take over the world is really funny, he's just secretly such a nerd here :'D)

Hi :) Interesting fic you've got there. I'm looking forward to read more.
I'm wondering how L got in his prison. I also like the L / Light relationship that is going on, with Light forced to bring cheesecake to his prisonner. Funny. But will L betray N and the orphanage for cheesecake ?

Also, I've got one question. Why would Sayu and her mother need to flee to escape Kira ? I mean Light know both their name and face so he could kill them whenever he wanted. Wouldn't it be the same for Matsuda ?

Hope to read you soon.

i love it so far. i like to see more.

Haha~! L! I really like this! I think Light will be forced to give him sweets~

This is really good... please update ()