Please continue with this story is the best thing I ever read continue it please

Please do with the story Next It's really a good story that you can read I'm an extreme Big Kirby fan And when I see Kirby in his special shapes I have to grin every time As a matter of fact When is MIKE KIRBY used in the story Because I believe the form Would like to listen to EVERYONE xD

You ruined the story

This is merely a railroad with Kirby, it is nothing but a waste of time if all that will change are a few extra scenes that won't affected the story

You market Kirby as stronger than Riser, but didn't follow your own line

They were winning, why did Rias give up so easily? Does she value some pieces more than others? Does she not care about their effort?

Or are you too fixed on the story to actually do anything?

In most settings of time travel, attempting to keep the original time line will degrade the quality of the story

Remember that the point of Fanfiction is to see the changes that are made by introducing a new or different element to the story

In this case Rias should have won the ratting game, even if that meant that she wouldn't fall in love with Issei

A story will sometimes write itself
11 is 2 and 14 is 5 not 2
If you want to keep the RiasxIssei pairing it should be done somewhere else with an extra scene or a filler chapter

Someone has to do a remastered or remake of this just in case there no update or it gets deleted

Update update update update

How dare you taint our precious boy with a harem fic

A decent start.

I know this is a really old fanfiction that has been dropped/discontinued, but I just wanted to make a quick comment:
It's nice that he got revived and all, but I really do have to question Rias's decision to revive him. Logically, and as heartless as this sounds, there was no reason to even think about reviving some dead kid on the street and using up a precious evil piece to do so, even if it's a pawn, especially when it isn't really guaranteed that the person you are reviving is actually sane/kind/not evil/isn't a idiot and won't become a liability/stray devil. I'm just glad that she actually hesitated at first, but it did make me dislike Issei's constant naivety a bit more. I can't take him seriously when the first thing he considered when he say the body of Kirby was the sexual benefits he may get from it, yet is suddenly protesting to Rias in order to get her to revive him because it would be wrong not to. Of course, the fanfiction actually needs to happen, so it's understandable why he was revived by Rias, but still, I can't help but feel that it was a tad bit forced.

I honestly don't know why I wrote this review, this fanfiction is almost 4 years old now. It's 23:49, it's cold, I'm exhausted but can't get to sleep, and I am very much bored. So I guess at least one of those conditions may have effected my decision to review this old fanfiction randomly. Anyways, cya, I guess.

I will be honest I am interested to see this continue...

Alright Japan, who decided to give Kirby a harem...

is this dead? this is one of the only good kirby fics on this site.

if you ever get back to this story,can you make a scene where kirby and koneko do that victory dance that's in every kirby game after they win some sort of fight together?

i would like to see the reaction of everyone viewing it while feeling that level of cuteness.

Great story

kiba's handsome, and kirby's adorable

Nice chapter my guys when you gonna do the next chapter its been 2 years since you update this i wanna see what happen next and i hope to see this

I found this story by mere chance because I read in another story the name and what series crossed over, and i loved it, the naivety of kirby in contrasts whit, well, everything in that world.
I would have loved to see the reactions of everybody to see meta knight face. Maybe he and kiba were sparring and kiba slashed meta' s mask by accident.
I'm sorry if I sound like a broken record, but this story it's in hiatus or abandoned? I can understand if life is in the way.