Dun, dun, dun!

I'm quite surprised. I just checked the reviews and no-one has mentioned this. If this is meant to be canon up to the time this story starts, Mac would know that Harm has had broken ribs before. When he fought Mic in Sydney, he got two broken ribs out of it.

Like the ending of this chapter, particularly the doctor's response. :-)

Awww, he really is a romantic at heart, wanting to wait until they're alone.

Would you believe? Only this morning I saw an episode of QI (TV show from BBC UK hosted by Stephen Fry until recently) where they talked about the Eye of London, and London and Tower Bridges. I think I'd heard that London Bridge was in Arizona but I'll certainly remember now, having heard it twice from two different sources on the same day.

I love the last bit of this chapter, about Mac and her packing. :-D

Ooo! Conspiracy theories... or whatever the word is I'm looking for. :-)

Nice story. Rather abrupt ending though.

Great story
However as a londoner i am annoyed at some of the geography if your going past the eye towards the houses of parliment then you are going away from tower bridge and in even if you were going the other way it is a good twenty minutes between these two locations by train

Just finished reading this interesting story Thanks!

I enjoyed this very much wish you would write a lot more!

its a great story! loved reading it!

I just read your story from start to finish without stopping because it is simply that good! It's definatly one of the best fanfics I've ever read and I have seen alot belive me. You have a lot of talent in your writing and I'm going to stop now so I can start the sequel!

I finally read your story (i wanted to read the next one but decided to read this one first) and I loved it! Keep up the good work.

I thought this was a great story but I did not like the ending but other than that it was great!

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