I think this is a great story, but I do think it needs a little editing, like the broom scene, mount your broom, instead of mound. Still a great story, and I don’t want to seem like I’m flaming you, just my two cents.

Fun chapter

Great

wow

Takes Out Wand, Points Wand At You, Casts Avada Kadavra At/On You.

tgood thing the potters will live dumbledore will fail to have his fail experiment tom kill them and plus the potters will immortal the real immortals unlike the fake one

You do realize that Hope is only 4 right? Why is she talking/acting like an 8 or even a 10 year old?

There's just so much wrong with this story i don't even know where to begin... The really scary part is that I've only read a little over 1/2 the chapter.

Also, since when do ships in Star Wars have tractor beams capable to levitating a person on a ship? Man, that woulda made soooo many action scenes in the movie much more easy for the characters.

Good story so far, please don't let any flames discourage you. We read these stories for the enjoyment of them. I'm enjoying it, Thanks.

give ginny a chance, she isn't a good person, but that was her mother's fault for the most part, so let her redeem herself, heck, in this au she could have an entire dedicated story of her escaping her mother's clutches

i hope ginny gets saved from her mothers schemes

You types out ALL of the students... Yea...
I can't help but wonder how many people skipped that?
You should probably move the various PoV's you have at the end into where you initially have the sorting. Not sure why you felt the need for such a separation.

There should probably be some background on why the Jedi and Earth are so intertwined. It's rather well written, but so utterly confusing.

Decent start, and I like the premise, though a little lacking on the descriptive details. The Skywalker family also seems a bit too widespread to me, but there's no details on why, so I won't say anything further.

Great story other than a few minor grammar/spelling errors. I hope your other stories are just as good if not better.

Well not a bad story but I would have thought a different ending but oh well