Reviews for A Time to Betray
Do U Trust Me chapter 1 . 7/6/2018
(This is a remake of my last story. Plz do not judge but enjoy. Takes place shortly after The Lying Game.) Best friends, Cyd Ripley and Shelby Marcus were in Science class learning about the atoms and how they connect in a certain way. Barry, Naldo, and Shelby were the only ones that were focused on the lesson. Usually Cyd would comment on something quietly to Shelby but didn't. She was still wondering if Shelby, her one and only best friend, trusted her after she lied about going to a concert without Shelby. Mr. Doyle: Cyd, can I talk to u in the hall for a minute plz? Cyd: Yeah. Doyle: *once Cyd was in the hall* Cyd, why are you being anti-social right now? Cyd: I'm not. I'm just thinkin about something. Doyle: U sure? 'Cause usually u don't act this way. Like when it's awkward in the teachers lounge... Okay then. U may go back in now, Cyd. Cyd: O-Okay thx. Doyle: Class dismissed. Shelby: Cyd? Cydney Ripley! Cyd: What?! Shelby: Okay calm down . And second, what is wrong with you? Cyd: I don't want to talk about it. Naldo: C'mon Cyd. We're your friends. Plz tell us. Cyd: Just leave me alone! *Cyd storms off* Barry: Jeez. What is up with Cyd? Shelby, have u noticed any strange behavior with Cyd lately? Shelby: Well, Cyd and I were eating dinner last night with my family until when I tried to speak to her, she'd snap at me for no apparent reason. Naldo: I think I know what is wrong with her. Shelby: What is it? Naldo: One word: Concert. Shelby: Concert? Oh no! *With Cyd at a table in the commons* Cyd: *Sobbing* What have I done? Daisy: Cyd, what's wrong? Cyd: Promise u won't tell? Daisy: Yeah. Cyd: Okay well I hurt Shelby's feelings about a week ago by lying about something but even though we made up, I still think I can't be trusted by her. Daisy: Well, why didn't u tell Shelby how u felt? Cyd: I w-was scared. But now, I feel guilty and... *turns pale and groans* Shelby: Cyd! Cyd: DO U TRUST ME?! Shelby: Cyd, Of course I do. Cyd: No you don't! U said at the concert with Naldo, "For the first time, I feel like I can't trust HER." AKA, me. Shelby: Cyd, I only said that 'cause I was hurt and mad at u. Cyd: R-Really? Shelby: Of course. Now let's get u to the nurse. I mean no offense, but you look very pale. Cyd: Sure. Thx too Daisy. Daisy: Anytime. *At Shelby's house; in Shelby/Cyd's room* Cyd: Thx Shelby. U know for everything. Shelby: Anytime Cyd. Anytime. Naldo: Feelin better, Cyd? Barry/Daisy: Yeah. Are you? Cyd: Yeah and guys, I'm sorry for snapping at you. I just got so frustrated. Naldo: It's cool. Cyd/Shelby: Whenever!
Do U Trust Me chapter 1 . 6/18/2018
(Plz Note that I know I was going to take a break on BFW Cyd Ripley Fanfics but I sometimes I'm impatient. Sorry for the trouble but plz enjoy. Takes place shortly after The Lying Game) Shelby and her best friend, Cyd were walking into school but as usual, Cyd was slow. This time though, she was very quiet but she hid it from Shelby. *Science-Class with Mr. Doyle* Shelby- Cyd? Cyd! What r u doing? Cyd- I am doing what u told me to. Shelby- Cyd, why r u- Doyle- Okay guys. Class dismissed. Barry- That was an awesome class. I love science! Naldo- And I love being ur bud, dude. Cyd, u okay? Cyd- Yeah well sure. *Lunchtime with Cyd and Shelby* Shelby- Here is ur lunch Cyd. Cyd- Thx but I am not hungry. Like I feel a little queasy right now; so I don't wanna eat. Shelby- Cyd, What's bothering u? Cause ur worrying me and u know how I am about silence. Cyd couldn't take it anymore and she blurted out… DO U TRUST ME?! Shelby- Cyd why would think that I don't. Oh. Cyd- U said that u can't trust me anymore back at the concert. That's what u said right. Shelby- I said, "For the first time, I feel like I can't trust HER." as in u. Cyd- Okay. I knew I shouldn't have lied and hidden this, but I didn't know how to-to ask. Shelby- Cyd, If u r uncomfortable with something, then I should tell u how I feel too. Like u said when we dated Joaquin and Drake and let them come between us. Deal? Cyd- Deal. But I think need to go to ur house and get some rest since I still feel queasy. Shelby- Sure. I'll take u to the nurse. Naldo- Everything okay now? Barry- Yeah. We were worried about u Cyd. Shelby- Cyd's fine but she feels unwell right now and I am taking her to the nurse. *After the Nurse Visit* Shelby- Cyd, get well soon. And I am sorry about saying that I couldn't trust u. Cyd- *Groans but smiles weakly* It's cool Shelbs and I am sorry too for u know lying. Shelby- I forgive u Cyd and if need me... I'm right there with u. Cyd- W-Whenever.
Lily chapter 1 . 11/10/2016
I thing I saw the guy in a hasmat suit and I saw Naldo and I saw Cyd and I Saw Shelby Marcus and this story has something to do about the future and Barry in the hasmat suit
KatTheGracefulKlutz chapter 3 . 6/28/2016
So... Barry betrayed them! And they never got out... Lab Rats cyber mask. I KNEW it!
KatTheGracefulKlutz chapter 2 . 6/28/2016
BARRY! WHAT?! HUH?! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! AAAAHHHH THIS IS REALLY GOOD!
Mereck chapter 1 . 5/4/2016
Funny how in the episode where Diesel time traveled, Barry was revealed as the guy experimenting on them.
Guest chapter 3 . 1/15/2016
I was totally thinking of lab rats when Barry turned back into G
PurpleNicole531 chapter 3 . 1/15/2016
Yay! I was excited to see you updated! I really liked this story and I thought the ending was great! Besides, not every story has a happy ending, right? Oh, yeah. I immediately thought of Lab Rats when 'Barry' morphed into G. I figured that was your inspiration! Aw, I can tell Barry feels horrible about betraying his friends. He never wanted it to go this far! Anyways, awesome story! I'd love to see more Best Friends Whenever from you soon! :D
lovelylehanna chapter 3 . 1/15/2016
I'm just speechless...I can't wait for more! :) (I love all of your stories so much, Daphrose!) ~DisneyShippper101
IlvMLBCNTNSBFWFIYMHDisNickGirl chapter 3 . 1/15/2016
I love the story but did you have to leave a cliffhanger? Are you going to write a sequel?
Numbuh110 chapter 3 . 1/15/2016
Yaaaaaay loved it! The suspense. Poor Naldo, where does he fit into this? And sheesh Barry, why would you tell on the girls?
spoiler alert chapter 2 . 11/30/2015
Spoiler! They were in the pelican ballroom. Bart and Marcie get together. Barry isn't in the suit
Guest chapter 1 . 11/30/2015
Isadora smackle from girl meats world has autism
lovelylehanna chapter 2 . 11/29/2015
You're story is awesome so far! I can't wait till you update!
Guest chapter 2 . 11/29/2015
Are you dead or something
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