Reviews for Total Drama Cycle
Guest chapter 8 . 1/12
This chapter was the best I ever read on this site.
When are going to upload chapter 9?
MasterBrattan chapter 8 . 9/20/2019
Poor Kenny has had a rough season; also, I'm surprised that Chris hasn't gotten a call about his extravagant purchases yet.
DannyPhantom619 chapter 1 . 4/13/2018
Pretty unique to have a transgender character for only times I've ever read about one are in explicit lemon fanfictions, basically non serious stories.

So, I like how you incorporated real genuine character in Sammy and can't wait until the next chapter.
OmegaDelta chapter 8 . 9/28/2017
Wonder if Dean and Scarlett will interact more in the coming challenges and what fresh hell does chris have planned for the remaining contestants. Keep up the good work.
Guest chapter 8 . 9/22/2017
It would be cool if you revamp what a dramatic life with the addition of dean as a little brother but love your stuff!
coldblue chapter 8 . 9/20/2017
Great chapter and thanks for updating!

Your Semi-Retirement, your Profile/Fan Fiction Homepage, and my thoughts on it:

Good. I mean, good that you will be working on the CURRENT stories you have and hopefully not create SO MANY new stories. I get though. This is a hobby and you need to explore everyone creative idea that comes into mind that you want to make a story about. I'm just glad you are limiting yourself a bit. I think it really good you have focus on your other Fan Fiction/Crossover stories you created. It going to be interesting to read how you update. I like that in the Profile/Homepage on the Fan Fiction, shows us possible chapters you have in the work for SOME stories. Also, the BOLD and Italics to tell use about which stories have large chapters and short chapters are very good. That way, people can stop asking about when you are going to update whatever story and all they have to do is look at your Profile/Homepage on Fan Fiction.

Dean:

Well, he the character I'm rooting for him to WIN the Total Drama Cycle competition or whatever. I kind of hope that given he orphan, rough background history and possibilities he has for the future. It really interesting to read each challenge and how it happens. The Death Race or in Dean cue card written Death Dearby, was pretty good to read and I was excited about it. Of course the challenges that have contestants vomit is always hilarious and gross to read in all of this. Ezekiel is close to my second favorite, but that only when he Feral to read. Duncan fighting with Chev is good to read as the story progresses

"Total Drama Cycle" NOT my most favorite story that you have written, but it still good to read and you do good "Total Drama" Fan Fiction. Good job. You captured my interest in the story such as this.

Questions

1) Should we expect you to try to finish the stories you have now for a while, until you feel like writing a new story?

2) Is it possible that "Total Drama Cycle" will end after the first "Total Drama Expedition" or should we expect Chris McLain to just keep getting the contestants on "Total Drama" competition?

3) Is they're a chance we read some contestants have one-night stand or forming a relationship soon?

Suggestions

1) Yes, focus on trying to finish stories. I think "Total Drama Cycle" could be finished if you want it to. Personal decisions. The HAREM stories with Naruto is up to you on how interested you are. The other stories? That tough. Honestly, the other stories probably take a while to make with the premise, plot or how the Prologue introduce the story. You have enough stories that would take TWO or THREE years to finish. I think you literally have ten stories to work on that has serious plot. I think Four or Five stories crossover within each other. Anyway, it a good idea to work on your OLDER or present stories.

2) I figure it would be interesting to read either way. You could end it with Total Drama Expedition could be the end of "Total Drama Cycle" or you can continue to go with more Contestants to play Chris McLain game show to getting million or even if possible, billion of viewers. I can read how this could go. You have a lot of contestants. Most likely it up to you.

3) That would be interesting. I did like "What a Dramatic Life" with how romances or even a one-night stand. I figure with "Total Drama Cycle" we would focus on possible Romance and One-Night stands. I think I like to read Chev and Courtney have a one-night stand, then read Chev regretting it later after he realize that Courtney is such a bitch and possible get in a fist fight with Duncan. Dean romance would be interesting to read, but you been doing well with how Dean romance has been. I mean, either read some more romantic moments or even one-night stand without sex/lemon scene. You could add sex/lemon scenes if you want or do a "Total Drama Cycle: What If's" as well for lemon/sex scenes and you won't worry about the Fan Fiction site deleting the stories because of Censorship/Rating of the story.

Keep up the good work and thanks for updating all your stories.

I can't wait to read your other Mass Updates in the future. That you will write on Week Days, but NOT on Weekends.
LyonsRoar20 chapter 8 . 9/19/2017
Aww man to bad James got knocked off. Well still he made it to the half way point. Keep up the good work!
DSX62415 chapter 8 . 9/18/2017
Stan: Oh my god, Chris killed Kenny.
Kyle: What?!
Stan: Yup, killed Kenny. You bastards.
This had to be done, I regret nothing.
StrongGuy159 chapter 8 . 9/18/2017
Funny chapter continue please.
grudgematch chapter 7 . 8/15/2017
Absolutely love it can't wait to read the rest of the chapters
LyonsRoar20 chapter 7 . 6/28/2017
Excellent stuff Mu, I don't have much to say, except to keep up the good work, don't let the flies bug ya to death and enjoy writing, this is meant to be fun not appease others, on oneself! I look forward to your next chapter!
StrongGuy159 chapter 7 . 6/28/2017
Funny 2 chapters (6 & 7) continue please.
coldblue chapter 7 . 6/27/2017
Thanks for updating and great chapter!

My thoughts for "Total Drama Cycle" currently:

You do have passion writing "Total Drama" based fan fiction than any other. The only thing that rivals that is "Naruto", "Marvel", and Cartoon "X-Over" in variety. What does that mean? Well you just write LONG and detailed chapters. Honestly, if you write such long chapters like this the only thing setting it back is that the UPDATES take longer. I will also be completely honest in writing that I only been follow Dean part in "Total Drama Cycle" the most, because I am a fan of GOOD Original Characters. You have a bit of that gift. I just like "Total Drama Cycle", but I at least like it enough to review and continue to follow this story.

Now, that out of the way let get to the reviewing my favorite character.

Dean:

Wow, Dean is causing drama with rejecting Josee confession of love and now I hope to read Josee trying to eliminate Dean. It rather interesting to read Dean, because he not the most stand out character unless we find out more about his Origins/Backstory. I really love how Dean had a enemy with Scott, but now he eliminated and I hope Josee fills in that road. Would not be surprised if Scott and Josee got together because of they dislike of Dean. Man, people who are deaf can make enemies is interesting to read because is one-side in Fan Fiction. On the LOVE TRAIN we Sky getting closer with her confession to Dean. I will be honest, I love to read Dean and Sky be couple. Still just to add the Drama I kind of hope Cleo and Dean have some moments. Something that involves Dean in a LOVE TRIANGLE with Sky and Cleo. It would be interesting to read how Dean handles TWO girls/women after his feelings. They're probably more, BUT it just seems like "Total Drama Cycle" as Cleo and Sky stick out for me falling for Dean and figure out which couple we will get.

Questions

1) When will they're be NO TEAM's and be every man/women for themselves?

2) Should we see Josee trying to eliminate Dean, now that Josee is rejected by Dean? Does Chris McLean know this to exploit it for ratings?

3) Are we going to have a moment when Chef find the people he playing online with? Would it be some the "Total Drama Cycle" contestants that are beating Chef and would Chef get revenge because of his Rage-Quieting?

4) Have you been keeping up with "DC" and "Marvel" movies either the more popular versions or the animated movies?

5) Is they're a chance the Contestants will go from a different means of transportation besides Bus's? Maybe Chris got a Train for them to travel on when they are done with MOST the contestants and do challenges on the Train?

Suggestions

1) I think after the NEXT team eliminated, they're no more teams. Sort of leaving the remaining teams and whoever left on them to fend for themselves. I always like to read EVERYONE for themselves, because then they make alliances or back deals with unsuspected people you would not think they would normal do. I wonder who will be the MAIN Villain and who will be the Hero. Honestly? I love to read Villain vs Villain in the FINALS, just to read who would come out on top.

2) That would be good to read. I kind of hope Josee makes more alliances just to get rid of Dean. Seems childish and simplistic with a goal, but when people get rejected a lot reason or logic does not come to them so easily. No, I can read Josee trying to do anything to get rid of Dean and sort of read Josee succeed where Scott failed in some areas. Of course, I hope Josee fails as well to get some comedy out of it or something unsuspecting. Such as Josee accidently get Dean hooked up with one of his fellow contestants. Just a idea.

3) I would LOVE to read Chef having a side story of basically getting revenge on EACH player that PAWNS him on his Online play games. Sort of read it being like "Jay and Silent Bob: Strike Back", with the whole plot of the movie stopping another movie being made by some bad parody of Batman and Robin BUT also go after all the people who were talking shit about Jay and Silent Bob. In the end? They make money for a bad movie AND they literally fly around the United States beating the living crap out of everyone that bad mouth they're actual names about them.

With Chef, I could read him pulling some strings/black mail to find out who keeps beating him online. Once he finds out who or whom it is, then he gets his revenge. I would find it funny if GOOD NUMBER of Total Drama contestants purposely attack Chef online character/name, just because they know it Chef. Where would that leave us? Chef Revenge! I honestly could read Chef doing something out of the "Godfather", such as sneaking in ONE the contestants houses and leaving his food in they're bed. When they wake up, they find Chef Mystery Meat! They scream and run around they're house. What do they find? Mores Chef Mystery Meat every where and some of the meat is MOVING towards them! Just funny idea.

4) I will be honest and write that I have not seen ALL of the "Marvel" Movies, which such because they are good movies. I have been keeping track with "DC" Movies, but I have not watched "Wonder Women" yet which bum's me out. I have kept track of "DC" Animated Movies, which are VERY good in my opinion to just watch. I have not watched a good "Marvel" Animated Movie in a long time since the TWO "Avengers" Animated Movies.

Why bring this up? I hope that you update your "DC" or "Marvel" based Fan Fiction stories that you take some ideas from the Movies. You obviously do, but I just hope you continue to do that because it awesome and great. Don't forget that Fan Fiction magic/power you have and remember to look at a lot of sources to develop you creative.

If you don't have any good ideas for "DC", then play the "Injustice" Videos games because they are interesting. The one thing that blows my mind in that "Injustice" Universe is the Multiverse and that Harley Quinn actually has a child/daughter with the Joker.

5) Yeah, I think train would be good. In "What a Dramatic Life" you followed the "Total Drama" cannon, until Odyssey part gets the Cruise Ship and a bit of Train ride. I kind of hope we have the contestants go on a Train to do SOME dangerous challenges on a Train and also outside of it. Reading them moving on top the train, sleeping in a crappy Cabin and basically dealing with new pains and issues. I'm just the worst and this is just a idea.

Keep up the good work and thanks for updating!
DRAGONfromheaven chapter 7 . 6/27/2017
Amazing chapter as always my dude, really stunning work evertime I see your stories it puts a smile on my face so good job.

Glad that my OC Chev got some major screen time so thank you very much for that my dude really appreciate that, still can't wait to see the pairing for him which will be really interesting imo.

The rivalry with Duncan is really interesting as always, I hope he comes out on top more often, I hope one of two scenarios happen 1) they make up and become somewhat good friends 2) Chev manhandles his ass haha.

The humor is really good and made me laugh, big 'WTF' when Sammy said he/she was a transgender that was very surprising, like how you're putting drama and shock into this, I like that.

You should have some challenge ideas from video games like Star Wars or have a war reenactment. Like vietnam that'd be hilarious.
DSX62415 chapter 7 . 6/27/2017
How'd I manage to miss chapter 6 in my updates?! As for having to wait for you to get a new system and having to rewrite things from scratch, I don't mind, as long as you take the time to make it work.
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