I like how you describe them dancing. It was different than how I always pictured it (imagining more formal), but it was funny and sweet. I love their conversation on the walk, his bold compliment that surprised and confused Hermione, him wishing to go to their spot, and the sweet present.

I wish you had continued this story.

I can’t believe I haven’t read this before.

I really like the description of Hermione’s concerns and feelings while modifying her parent’s memories and how looking forward to Ron’s comfort. I also love how him helping her was realized in the 2nd chapter.

Omg! I love it! And im curious now to what she wrote! Hahaha

Just found this and read all four chapters. Like it but especially the fourth one. Looking forward to the next chapters.
Thank you for writing and sharing.

Gosh! This story is great - you have captured Ron and Hermione so well. I'm definitely looking forward to finding out what the note says.

I hope you continue - I know how real life gets in the way sometime - but you are so good at writing RH :)

MORE!

Well, Hi ! I'm a bit nervous. I'm not the one who review a lot (yeah, bouuuuh). Actually I'm the one who does not review at all. Most of the time it is because I don't speak english and I'm always struggling to find the words to describe how wanderfull the fic was. Sometimes it'll so wanderfull that I begin to write something, but then I'll lose patience and I'll just tell myself that what I just write doesn't mean anything so what's the point ?
But this, really, is the best depiction of Ron an Hermione I read in a long long time. It is sooo canon I just loose myself. Yeah I know that almost everyone wrote about DH missing moment / post DH etc, but it is really my favorite kind of fic when it's well writted and you did a really really good job. So please keep writting this, it amazing. And hank you for what you've already done.

I hope you update soon! Love this.

Ahhh so sweet. But but...what did the note say? Don't worry we will... what?

Please write more for this story! I love it, you write Ron and Hermione so beautifully and I can't wait to see their relationship progress in a way that neither the books or movies could show us because they were Harry's stories. Can't wait till you update, in the meantime I'll be reading all your other stories. I know I'm just a random reader, but I had a small request for a story that I think you could write so well, and I hope you take requests.

I read in an article that the actor who played Scabior in the films originally had a much more brutal scene between Ron/Hermione and his character in the forest right before the trio are captured and taken to malfoy manner. The scene was supposed to be a scene in which Scabior acts perverse to Hermione, smells her hair and says to her that she smells like vanilla and "she'll be his favourite." Ron tries to help her and Scabior taunts Ron and beats him up, all while Hermione has to watch helplessly. Now I'm not one for Ron or Hermione getting tortured, i just think that it would have been a good scene to show their love for one another, and the fear at the other one potentially getting hurt.

Anyway, I know a lot of your stories are based in the book universe but I'd love to read this scene from the film written from your perspective, seeing as how us fans may never get a chance to see it because its in the list of unreleased deleted scenes from the films. Here's a quote from Nick Moran the actor who plays Scabior:

"I’ve seen all my bits although as you are probably aware some of them were watered down a little but because they were too gory. Some of the scenes became very real and when you leave my character in the woods with a load of kids what am I going to do? I’m going to do whatever I want!

It was all a bit of a shock and they pruned down my torture scenes where I beat up Rupert, call him ginger and stamp on him. It’s going to be great, there is loads going on and then there is the second film which is going to be absolutely spectacular!"

Of course it's totally up to you! Thanks if you can, and I'll be checking back regularly for anything new :-)

Please continue!

OHHHHHH LOVE IT- I mean I get it- the Mission...it wasn't the right time yet...

The otter and ink- he knows his girl beautifully...

The dancing scenes were hysterical! :)

Can I smack them both upside their heads! Argh they were so infuriating! ;) btw AWESOME CHP!

Noticed that bit of Ron showing maybe a tiny bit of jealousy towards Harry? I wish he knew and understood that Harry and Hermione- lil bro/big sis and in some ways really that he and Hermione are like Harry's parents.

I LOVE RON! He loves his girl with all of his heart and right now is just being there for her as her best friend.

Omg the emotions...I could feel Hermione's hurt and ache and pain :'( I wish Ron could have been there with her but it would have been too hard :( soooo goooood!