Dang this was good. Thanks for writing!

I love your stories so much!

Gargle! Poor Dipper! Fantastically written and I loved it

(And yes, I am just making my way through all of your stories )

EVERYTHING YOU WRITE IS SO ANGSTY AND POOR DIPPER- I LOVE IT THANK YOU!

Oh no ! Surely this can't be over! What happens next? More on how Mabel feels and Dipper too! The poor kids suffering all alone when they're right next to each other...

So I hope this isn't just a one shot. It does have quite an interesting underline to it, and I would love to see more.
I think it kinda addresses a few things that the show never has. I mean the trauma that dipper must have gone through when bill took over his body was never really addressed in the show it was more of a "well that happened" kind of thing and never really given any further evaluation.( kinda wonder if Dippers little panic attack in the last episode was fuelled by a bit more than bill possessing Ford, I think the kid is absolutely terrified of bill because of sock opera).
Anyway great job hope to see more.

This has real potiential to turn into something more than just a oneshot

... This is beautiful. Please write more soon, or I just might die!

this is gust waht i needed after a long day of homework thanks :)

I'm been waiting for a fic like this to come out since the new episode! Thx so much! :D

I was hoping to find something like this. I dunno. Maybe it's just an extension of the emotion and craziness from the episode, and I just felt like I wasn't quite 'done' yet? Something like that.

Anyway, this is really amazing. Particularly the way both twins are still hurting from the events of the day. I'm very impressed.

And there goes my happines ... Why u do dis ? D:

Ahah ;) anyway thanks for the chap !

Poor Dipper:(

A nice bit of realism to Gravity Falls, well done.

That was intense! I love your writing style and how this story is kicking!