Reviews for Friends with benefits
derektomlinsonln chapter 13 . 3/1
hinata hissing at her husband naruto calm the fuck down relax it's not all time that i want my naruto s penis in my pussy
Guest chapter 3 . 11/28/2016
Wait... her name is ayumi, no yakuji... or is that her last name?... explain..
Guest chapter 2 . 11/28/2016
Ummm thats not how lesbian sex works... it would probably really hurt actually...
Guest chapter 13 . 8/28/2016
Sorry i really líke the lemons but for me the idea of Hinata always wearing the strapons in every fanfiction is not Fair... I mean why everybody want her to be the hachi. For me is better her as a neko
sakaewmatsui chapter 19 . 3/21/2016
I want an Oc in Yuri High.I really like your story,keep it up
Guest chapter 19 . 3/12/2016
I hope we can read your stories soon!
Guest chapter 19 . 2/25/2016
Hinata, Ino, Hanabi, Sakura, Tenten, Tsunade, Kurenai, Anko, Kushina, Konan are all good.
Rukia, Orihime, Yoruichi, Soi-fon, Matsumoto, Hiyori, Unohana, Karin, Yuzu (They can be Hanabi's classmates), Riruka, Nel
Lucy, Erza, Wendy, Mavis (loli teacher!), Ultear, Mirajane
I don't watch One Piece, but I'm sure some characters would fit in.
Guest chapter 19 . 2/22/2016
Sounds good I think you should make her a oc you seem to do well with at , I would like to see tayuya from Naruto as a bully who really cares for her, Lucy from fairy tail as best friend, ino Sakura hinata tenten
Guest chapter 19 . 2/21/2016
I was hoping that you would write a final chapter for Friends with benefits. But the new project certainly sounds promising!

I think you can include video games like Final Fantasy and Kingdom Hearts too. And don't forget teachers, Anko, Yoruichi and Quistis woud make great teachers. Think about the loving mothers and sisters of the heroines too. A crossover type story like this works best with an OC, I think. Good luck with the writing!
Guest chapter 18 . 2/14/2016
Good chapter, we need the next one.
Guest chapter 16 . 12/19/2015
I have a suggeston! Make Hinata's mom catch Hinata and Hanabi and join. Your Hinata chapters are the best, keep up the good work!
Guest chapter 16 . 12/17/2015
I really like it so far, even though the spelling and grammar is off sometimes. Since it's a Naruto story, I would like to see some of their abilities used in these situations. The byakugan can see through walls, so Hinata could easily catch Shizune between Tsunade's legs under the table, or Hanabi could catch her sister and friends. Ino's mind switching technique is good for seduction, as she can switch, arouse the body, and switch back, making it easier to make someone join, even teachers or relatives. As TenTen is a weapons expert, I can easily see her as an adult toys expert. Etc, etc... And I would like to see Anko or Kushina, or the other mothers in action.
Guest chapter 16 . 12/5/2015
keep it up looking forward to the next.
Yuri loverX chapter 16 . 12/6/2015
damn that was a hot chapter, so sexy
Guest chapter 15 . 12/4/2015
Please update
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