I really enjoyed your story! I'm not quite sure why Harry was passing out so much! Magical exhaustion maybe? What happened to the "Dark Lord problem"? I still have questions!

Please please continue and does anyone reading the paper finds out how dumbledore treated harry

Great story! thank you for writing.

that was good - but i think dumblydore deserved worse than what he got lol. :p

This is unusual, too simple, too easy.. and almost not worth reading either.
At least you wrote what i never read in any fanfic, that harry told his story right there in the great hall on his first day. Don't like the fact though he ends up in ravenclaw but hermione doesn't, besides that the whole point in hermione and the troll is hardly worth mentioning cause where are the weasleys?
Anyway doesn't really matter i guess cause there isn't any interaction between his friends to speak off, only with adults?
And that goblin ring or potter ring transport whatever is just way to easy, so by the time he left hogwarts it became boring.
Dumbles just let him go, voldy just let him go wtf!

Honestly this entire story is one major fuck up after another
Not worth reading

This was great. The tone was fun, and it's good to see a more independent Harry. Thanks for the story.

What about Voldy? The Triwizard tournament? Most people still make Harry go to the tournament. I would have liked to know how he avoided it this time. Nice story.

Great story! Neutral Harry is one of my favorite alignments, and getting Gringotts involved is my absolute favorite story themes! The writing itself was also spectacular, and I just couldn’t stop reading

Is this finished?

An interesting story.

I enjoyed your story a lot. I was pleased to see that you stuck to your decision of writing everything from Harry's POV and I think that it worked well for your storyline. If you wanted to expand on this at all then you've left your other characters open for story's about them.
Thankyou for sharing you time and imagination with us

What happened to Moldshorts?

This is really good! Please continue!

Great story