Reviews for Memories
Gilltyascharged chapter 4 . 11/2/2016
I'm glad you returned to this story. I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this. May I add that Rachel may sound too "normal" for Karma. I mean her name is Karma and her brother's name is Zen. Lucas and Molly aren't known for going with conventional names like Rachel. Not to mention Karma's aunt goes by the name Sage. I'm guessing Amy and Karma could end up falling in love all over again or at least I hope that's where you're going with this in spite of the divorce Lucas and Molly are rooting for.
KarmAshcroft chapter 3 . 9/19/2015
The POV is kinds confusing, because you sometimes use 3rd person pronouns and then 1st person pronouns, so it messes me up, but besides that this chapter is good! I'm worried about the whole divorce though...hope you write more soon!
Anne chapter 2 . 9/11/2015
Despite all the problems that can not divorce. Amy needs to work on that relationship, but they love each other and need to rebuild trust , companionship and love. Eu amo essa história , mas os pais de Karma não pode interferir em seu relacionamento.
Anne chapter 1 . 9/7/2015
Simply passionate. Please do not delay the update!
nabians chapter 1 . 9/7/2015
Great story, love it. Some of grammars and missing letters needed to be fixed but other than that, keep it up! Great concept.. I love how Karma ask her out, move in with her, marry her, and have a kid. Kudos! :)
FrozenMachinery chapter 1 . 9/7/2015
Omg I love this, I'm addicted I want to know what happens next
KarmAshcroft chapter 1 . 9/7/2015
Oh my gosh I really wanna see how this plays out! I'm a sucker for Karmy future-fics, but the added memory loss thing makes it better. Hope you write more!