me encanto .

Jajajaja. Fue un one ahot muy divertido, me gusto mucho, gracias por publicarlo, me he reído demasiado, muchos saludos!

I was wondering why Karin was in a dress and then realized you took someones video and changed the pairing and who the brother was. Since you copied another persons story, and replaced the characters you ended up having a character do something they wouldn't do, and you also ended up with a relationship rushed for Karin and Toshiro's personalities as well as physical ages.

It's great to be inspired by another persons story, but your job as a writer is to figure out what would change beyond just the pairings, and to also make the plot your own. Not doing so isn't fair to the person who created the other work.

jajaja morí de risa XD pobresito, pero quien lo manda a estar diciendo cosas indecentes en un lugar publico XD

Valla, valla, justamente la fresa tenía que escuchar la perturbadora verdad sobre la relación de los enamorados jajajaja, pero a quien se le ocurre hablar de sexo cuando lchigo se encuentra cerca xD... De seguro fue divertido ver la escena... XD... Bueno yo imaginó mucho :v... Pero eso es lo mágico no jejeje xD... ;)