Please never stop writing, your mind is a beautiful thing. One of dreams and hurricanes. Lovely in a wild way, but lovely all the same.

This was really sweat. I love Pynch. I just loooovvvve it!

Wow - I love the style this is written in! I love the repition and the nod to Halsey (love her!) and how poetic everything feels. The repition of the phrase "This is how it began" reminds me of the repition of "depending on where you began, this was a story about _" in the Raven King (even though you wrote this before that was released), so that's cool too. Anyways, squeal! So adorable and beautiful!

So sweet it hurts.

This has got to be one of the best things that I have ever read. Beautifully written and perfect characterization. I loved it.

This was so beautiful. I love it.