Reviews for As Time Goes By |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I wish you would come and work on this story some more. It's quite a good start. |
![]() ![]() Making her still in school when he says those four words just doesn't work. They had to have been graduated otherwise Lissa and Eddie wouldn't have been able to go with her on the mission to free Victor, they also wouldn't have had access to the information about the prison. It always sucks when writers make stupid changes to the original plot without considering the consequences. That aside this story has a lot of potential. |
![]() ![]() ![]() really wish there was more, i dont know if i really want Rose and Dem to get back 2gether. i really like the guy who said he was her husband, i wish Ro would get over Dem and realize her Guardian friend has always been there for her and start 2 fall for her |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yup, that sounds like Tasha alright. |
![]() ![]() ![]() tasha you are barnbat shit crazy oh well more updates please love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it :) xx Thank you for this amazing chapter! |
![]() ![]() Update update update please... |
![]() ![]() ![]() More updates pleeeeeeeeaaaaassse love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very interesting! |
![]() ![]() Your writing is good and your storyline is interesting but you are too pissy with your author's notes. You don't have to respond to every review and getting pissy and defensive when someone says they don't like something about your story makes you look insecure. Drop the length author's notes and needless recaps, I mean how often do you read a book that starts with a recap on every page/chapter, and just write. Unless of course you are using them to boost your word count and puff your ego at how much you have written. As interested as I am in the story it is fading fast having to wade through the extra crap. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice chapter, usually at one year without update I give up on it, happy to see this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow dramatic. For what Dimitri had said was a little bit of a rude encounter. I don't think rose is married. Loved the chapter please continue to update can't wait for more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update soon please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() More updates please |