Reviews for Mother of all Mayhem
Psyched chapter 1 . 10/2/2016
Too cute! Loved this.
mefoote chapter 1 . 4/21/2016
Hilarious. Very visual
JaspersMum chapter 1 . 10/12/2015
Great story
Guest chapter 1 . 9/27/2015
EPILOGUE
BlueTigress chapter 1 . 9/27/2015
Lol sooo funny!
Leahdensawesome chapter 1 . 9/3/2015
Love it so cute that should SO happen but u know it probably won't because we want it to happen (sigh)
jmlane1966 chapter 1 . 8/31/2015
This made me giggle and smile. Well done.
me chapter 1 . 8/29/2015
read it again ,
still laughing.
nicely done
thank you
me chapter 1 . 8/29/2015
great way to meet the future mother in law...
well hopefully, that is.
nicely done, very funny
thank you
Guest chapter 1 . 8/29/2015
Keep it coming.
me chapter 1 . 8/29/2015
well, that would be a great way to meet...
very funny. well done as always
thank you
Guest chapter 1 . 8/29/2015
Bit inconsiderate to put a huge spoiler in the summary you know not every one wants to know whats going to happen some like surprises and actively avoid spoilers then you go do this
Guest chapter 1 . 8/29/2015
il faut admettre que la rencontre est mémorable. J'aimerais que cela se passe ainsi dans le show.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/29/2015
YES! I Love It. Thank you I thought this would be a great idea for a fanfic challenge. Maybe for your next Meet the Mother Challenge, you could write one that is M rated where they get caught in the act by his mother. It would be embarrassingly hysterical. Thanks again. You are an amazing writer.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/29/2015
I love this! I am not a writer but my thought was Deeks being up first cooking breakfast while Kensi showers. Kensi comes out wrapped in nothing but a towel asking if breakfast was ready yet. She is drying her hair with another towel and doesn't see his mom in the living room until he gets her attention. She is mortified to meet her wearing nothing but a towel. Based on the fact they have said Deeks ignores his ringing phone all day I know this won't happen but it would be funny. Where has your friend Bamie (or something like that) gone? She left mid story too and it was a good one.
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