Reviews for Mother of all Mayhem |
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Psyched chapter 1 . 10/2/2016 Too cute! Loved this. |
mefoote chapter 1 . 4/21/2016 Hilarious. Very visual |
JaspersMum chapter 1 . 10/12/2015 Great story |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/27/2015 EPILOGUE |
BlueTigress chapter 1 . 9/27/2015 Lol sooo funny! |
Leahdensawesome chapter 1 . 9/3/2015 Love it so cute that should SO happen but u know it probably won't because we want it to happen (sigh) |
jmlane1966 chapter 1 . 8/31/2015 This made me giggle and smile. Well done. |
me chapter 1 . 8/29/2015 read it again , still laughing. nicely done thank you |
me chapter 1 . 8/29/2015 great way to meet the future mother in law... well hopefully, that is. nicely done, very funny thank you |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/29/2015 Keep it coming. |
me chapter 1 . 8/29/2015 well, that would be a great way to meet... very funny. well done as always thank you |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/29/2015 Bit inconsiderate to put a huge spoiler in the summary you know not every one wants to know whats going to happen some like surprises and actively avoid spoilers then you go do this |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/29/2015 il faut admettre que la rencontre est mémorable. J'aimerais que cela se passe ainsi dans le show. |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/29/2015 YES! I Love It. Thank you I thought this would be a great idea for a fanfic challenge. Maybe for your next Meet the Mother Challenge, you could write one that is M rated where they get caught in the act by his mother. It would be embarrassingly hysterical. Thanks again. You are an amazing writer. |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/29/2015 I love this! I am not a writer but my thought was Deeks being up first cooking breakfast while Kensi showers. Kensi comes out wrapped in nothing but a towel asking if breakfast was ready yet. She is drying her hair with another towel and doesn't see his mom in the living room until he gets her attention. She is mortified to meet her wearing nothing but a towel. Based on the fact they have said Deeks ignores his ringing phone all day I know this won't happen but it would be funny. Where has your friend Bamie (or something like that) gone? She left mid story too and it was a good one. |