*Thumbs up*

This looks like a great start
I love it

I can see why you went with this idea. His creepy obsession with Saber aside, Gil really has the makings of an excellent sitcom arch-nemesis.

I mean, I can just imagine him getting a puppy and baby-talking to it. "Who's a mongrel? You a~re. Yes, you are." The puppy, of course, responds to the name "Mongrel" and not the name Gil actually gave it. Gil, being Gil, doesn't notice until he tries to introduce it to guests.

Anyway, well done. Using Gil's perspective really brings out the comedy potential.

this idea is hilarious, unfortunately it looks like no-one is planning to adopt this and i doubt you're going to continue.

Comedy. Gold. Faker Soda especially.

Dear god this needs a full story.

Gil working at same place as Maou. Or better yet, in one on the other side of road. Such potential for hilarity... Zelretch, you were bored again?
p.s. I hope that someone will make this in full story.

Nooo! Please! Continue or adopt! 'Charisma' and 'Golden Rule' can finally show their full potential!

There's a gold mine here, you're just strachting the surface here.

somebody do this, this comedy gold

Well, that’s really short, but I like the idea. Considering the Human World in “The Devil is a Part-Timer” is even worse on supernatural abilities than Gaia, even Gilgamesh could be left off without his powers. And seeing him try to find a way to get them back might make for an interesting story. His rivalry with Sadao would also be an interesting touch.
Though I personally wouldn’t have put him into the role of part-timer. If we go with his high charisma and the fact that he is a 2/3-Divine Spirit which would probably make him stronger the more people “pray” to him, I think he would better fit as a movie star or model.

The idea it self is stupid even without all of his powers Gil has inborn ability that allows him to attract wealth and artifacts so this fic is stupid

you need to check the format

A bit hard to read

I think you might want to look this over again. The formatting is screwing with the story itself.

Also, the idea is so ludicrous. My hat is off to you, and luck should the Golden King ever spawn and see this story.