Love

I really loved your story! I love stories that are like these actually and having Holy Rime in it made it better! I also liked how You put the Nordics and Canada together. I never knew that before, but hey, you learn something new everyday!

All of my dreams are coming true in thus one fabric, this is the greatest thing I have ever read! THE FEELS!

Good job America you're finally out of the closet! sorry that was my first thought when Iggy dragged America out of the closet.

Being that they are the Nordics, they would not be referrig to others using japanese words. That is the anime talking and broke the immersion of your otherwise good story. Try replacing the words with nordic language equivalents. And the others with their respective languages, even if you must use Google Translate.

I think I cried- no. I KNOW I cried...

Love Canada and the Nordics! Always like reading fics about Vinland! Lovely work! Happy writing!

traductions:

todavia tan hermoso (still so beautiful)

Mio para siempre (mine forever)

the o at the end of mio and hermoso indicate that you are talking about a male, if you keep the a you are calling Lovino a woman

This was so cute! Great job!

"All countries are known to have high tolerance from alcohol"*

*Except England

I love this story.

Too cute! :3:3:3

How CUTE! I pity Italy... Germany didn't even know that he's HRE! QAQ Anyways, LOVE this story! WRITE ON!

Please make more of these! I really like the Vibland!verse part!

Ha! I love it! From all the fluff to the spamano and the Nordics and the net day and wow. Nice job.