Thank you for continuing this! I cannot begin to tell you how excited I am to read a Grandia story focusing on Mullen, Leen & Garlyle. I can't wait to see where you are taking this. Please keep writing! :)

I just came across this last night and really love where you are exploring the story from. Please continue, it is so enjoyable to read a good Grandia I story! I need to know what happens next! :)

Holy shit the sage of toads doing a fic about one of my favourite rpgs ever yes this shall be getting kept an eye on and now with the other stuff out of the way I liked the way you characterised what we knew about the trio and mullen and built upon it good work

Oh man, a Grandia fanfic ? A GOOD Grandia fanfic ? You awesome crazy bastard.

I've never played the game, but your writing is strong enough to read it anyway! I'm really enjoying the Ciaphas Cain-style framing, and the outside investigator's perspective on the main characters' antics. 5/5