Oh my word! I don't really know what to say, but that was hot as hell! This usually isn't my jam, but I could totally envision this...nicely written.

So I wasn't expecting to like this. At all. But these are dry hiatus months and a girl's gotta do what a girl's gotta do. Well colour me surprised. I enjoyed it very much (just like Rick lol)

I think what I loved about it was how true the voices and dialogue were to the characters. I could picture pre-ZA, boyscout Rick Grimes staring out the window hard as desperation and unbearably embarrassed by the whole thing. And pre-ZA Shane, who would have done anything for his best friend in the world, saving his life (from death of blueballs lol)

I like the ambiguous relationship between Shane ant Rick! Why there isn't more fics like yours?

Yes! Loved it!

This is the greatest shit. I remember how difficult it was for you to write. It turned out awesome. Now Rick should have Shane get Lori off. Then they'd find their way back to one another. Rick could watch...

Oh my word!

Just had to drop in and let you know that Shane's analogy about the toothpick and the sledgehammer and his description of Lori's backside both actually made me laugh so hard that I snorted. XD

And on that note, this was a good one-shot, and I enjoyed reading it. :)